tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post2015042148975382258..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: Three Short PoemsDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-28113810150831094862014-03-04T08:05:29.998+00:002014-03-04T08:05:29.998+00:00Latest cars and vehicles, Latest Mazda Models, Rac...Latest cars and vehicles, Latest Mazda Models, Racing Cars, International Sport Cars, Concept Cars, PS-Pod, Strange Vehicles, Nissan, Royce Corniche, Ford Concept Cars, Strange Vehicles, Mercedes and More Sport Cars and Vehicles with Pictures and Info<br />WorldLatestVehicles.blogspot.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02348965499852960959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-76125858308288116622014-02-16T11:22:59.460+00:002014-02-16T11:22:59.460+00:00Make Money Online is very easy now, In Internet sy...Make Money Online is very easy now, In Internet system we have now best earning system without any work, Just Invest some Money into your Business and Make Perfect Life time Earnings with this Business.<br />Join Now for Make Perfect Business and Earn Money online from home.<br />www.hotfxearnings.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01401204798857243702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-9159055743914278452014-01-26T06:38:50.556+00:002014-01-26T06:38:50.556+00:00Classified Sites, Pakistani Classified Sites, USA ...Classified Sites, Pakistani Classified Sites, USA Classifieds, Indian Classifieds, Entertainment Articles, Entertainment News, Entertainment Pictures, Bollywood, Hollywood and Lollywood Pictures and Videos, Entertainment Latest updates, Hot Entertainment News and Pictures Funny Entertainment Pictures, lol Pictures, Funny Pictures and Much More Fun Only on 1 Current Affairs Network<br />hotcurrentaffairs.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06816917951469190614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-17674970770819830392014-01-15T03:37:16.052+00:002014-01-15T03:37:16.052+00:00Top Ten Classified Website List, Pakistani Classif...Top Ten Classified Website List, Pakistani Classified Sites, USA Classifieds, Indian Classifieds, Entertainment Articles, Entertainment News, Entertainment Pictures, Bollywood, Hollywood and Lollywood Pictures and Videos, Entertainment Latest updates, Hot Entertainment News and Pictures Funny Entertainment Pictures, lol Pictures, Funny Pictures and every thing you want...<br />www.hotcurrentaffairs.commuhammad asimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11399147044027992833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-19976436715800930552013-07-30T21:38:53.474+01:002013-07-30T21:38:53.474+01:00Having worked with many short poems as an editor o...Having worked with many <a href="http://www.whatthortoldme.com/quote-of-the-day/" rel="nofollow">short poems</a> as an editor of a literary magazine, I have to say I'm very impressed with these. The transitory nature between the first and the last poems makes them flow together, though they each stand alone as great pieces. Thanks for sharing these!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06048658177329809248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-46665156416103996532013-07-24T12:31:03.651+01:002013-07-24T12:31:03.651+01:00Each poem a gem, so different in character. The fi...Each poem a gem, so different in character. The first, cheerful - and congratulations to you and Doreen - 55 years is a wonderful achievement.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-514214277876521892013-07-23T11:42:00.955+01:002013-07-23T11:42:00.955+01:00I take the point made by sharplittlepencil and wil...I take the point made by sharplittlepencil and will see what I can do, though finding time is a little difficult just now.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-15613727860962136102013-07-23T11:40:07.229+01:002013-07-23T11:40:07.229+01:00Thank you so much to everyone for all the good wis...Thank you so much to everyone for all the good wishes to Doreen and I. We had a very quiet 55th anniversary, necessitated by my health I fear, but no less enjoyable for that, and appreciated all your kind thoughts.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-35603407860462135212013-07-23T06:29:18.318+01:002013-07-23T06:29:18.318+01:00Dave, the first poem has a sweet whimsy... the thi...Dave, the first poem has a sweet whimsy... the third possesses that humanity I crave in poetry. And the singing, what an ending!<br /><br />Congrats on your anniversary and on the feature at Poets United. Wish we knew more about you just as a person, but more than willing to soak up what you have to offer as a poet. Peace, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-36371123838927018232013-07-22T17:53:03.620+01:002013-07-22T17:53:03.620+01:00Wow Dave--a full set of winners here-love the flow...Wow Dave--a full set of winners here-love the flowers decorating the corner and the vivid images everywhere. Very impressive :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-37807265700738768432013-07-22T11:55:55.376+01:002013-07-22T11:55:55.376+01:00A beautiful trilogy which starts on a romantic not...A beautiful trilogy which starts on a romantic note and ends in a very realistic tale of our times. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-68998748908830747272013-07-22T10:49:42.087+01:002013-07-22T10:49:42.087+01:00Oh wow Dave! That second poem you blew me away wit...Oh wow Dave! That second poem you blew me away with your words, brilliant<br /><br />Happy Anniversary =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-62458615789173032692013-07-20T17:00:28.955+01:002013-07-20T17:00:28.955+01:00Maybe you write better near your anniversary. You...Maybe you write better near your anniversary. You've been feted above, well deserved. ~MaryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-84282173824737654582013-07-20T09:59:53.327+01:002013-07-20T09:59:53.327+01:00Some powerful confrontation between two men all on...Some powerful confrontation between two men all on account of a woman. Happens all the time. Great observation Dave!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-61043060722600026202013-07-20T09:32:42.272+01:002013-07-20T09:32:42.272+01:00Three fine shorts, Dave. Happy Anniversary to you ...Three fine shorts, Dave. Happy Anniversary to you two as well; it was ours on Monday - shared with Claudia.<br /><br />Each of your poems says something about human nature in all its diversity, and reminds us that not everything is as it first appears.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-41966729465053030642013-07-19T22:28:11.489+01:002013-07-19T22:28:11.489+01:00I love all three Dave but the first strikes a fami...I love all three Dave but the first strikes a familiar chord...good to use yet something in me hopes for more than costcutters!!!Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-73533847660423996812013-07-19T22:16:22.236+01:002013-07-19T22:16:22.236+01:00happy anniversary :)
And your two last poems were...happy anniversary :)<br /><br />And your two last poems were really amazing. I especially liked the second one because of how dark, chill it is...as well as being completley mysterious and complicated as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-71521868203911343502013-07-19T20:49:39.543+01:002013-07-19T20:49:39.543+01:00"But now, from where I've come to watch -..."But now, from where I've come to watch -- small<br />bedroom eyrie looking out between<br />the acer and the tall (unpruned) forsythia "<br /><br />I just love that. I could picture it so clearly.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86222952105469147172013-07-19T19:55:19.523+01:002013-07-19T19:55:19.523+01:00These are well observed Dave.These are well observed Dave.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-83740096087702228452013-07-19T19:30:06.182+01:002013-07-19T19:30:06.182+01:00They give that immediate impact of the great haiku...They give that immediate impact of the great haikus even if they are, not much, longer.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-8869885930151993892013-07-19T19:28:39.820+01:002013-07-19T19:28:39.820+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-81571292051133695032013-07-19T17:10:37.640+01:002013-07-19T17:10:37.640+01:00Hi Dave -
Three for the price of one. Great rea...Hi Dave - <br /><br />Three for the price of one. Great reads. I think the first was my favorite.Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09751363280115223716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-33657383569944791832013-07-19T16:55:11.996+01:002013-07-19T16:55:11.996+01:00I really enjoyed this, partly because I am not goo...I really enjoyed this, partly because I am not good at studying characters. And when it is so well done, in superb story telling form, I pay attention. And learn.ninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-39710442685183210132013-07-19T16:48:55.820+01:002013-07-19T16:48:55.820+01:00That first one is a nice surprise! Hope you enjoy...That first one is a nice surprise! Hope you enjoyed it :-) Nice shorts!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-66694672387693975122013-07-19T16:01:05.979+01:002013-07-19T16:01:05.979+01:00Happy anniversary to you & yours Dave ~
The s...Happy anniversary to you & yours Dave ~<br /><br />The second part is dark character, excellent portrayer of the girl ~<br /><br />The third is a contrast and that ending line is superb ~ How fast times have changed ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com