tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post4466382011400602653..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: Superman MeDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-36643022305931452542011-01-19T16:47:28.836+00:002011-01-19T16:47:28.836+00:00omni-the-lot!
I shared your vision, I think!omni-the-lot!<br /><br />I shared your vision, I think!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-10460321627513527332011-01-19T09:23:08.066+00:002011-01-19T09:23:08.066+00:00Lucas
My thanks for those comments. I do agree wit...<b>Lucas</b><br />My thanks for those comments. I do agree with them. It's a theme that occurs to me from time to time. This time it came out of the blue, so to speak, when I began to write.<br /><br /><b>Kat</b><br />I take the Ogden Nash bit as a compliment. Thanks for it. I'm really glad you liked it.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-22116279002441092682011-01-18T18:51:22.670+00:002011-01-18T18:51:22.670+00:00This is a bit Ogden Nashian for me (which is good)...This is a bit Ogden Nashian for me (which is good). I can't say I understand it completely, but I liked it!<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-44744599383917586202011-01-18T12:18:58.499+00:002011-01-18T12:18:58.499+00:00Dave,
I really like the way this poem moves on wit...Dave,<br />I really like the way this poem moves on with its drivng rhythm. Regarding previous comment, I think Seussian is a great compliment. The idea of medical science gone briliantly balmy is still a great theme 200 yrs on from Mary Shelley. Your final line brings it all home in one.Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07642126053527835870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-64653689612353543412011-01-18T11:12:44.124+00:002011-01-18T11:12:44.124+00:00Helen
Thanks Helen. This one was strange: whilst I...<b>Helen</b><br />Thanks Helen. This one was strange: whilst I was writing it, I didn't think it was working. After I'd finished it, I thought it might be OK. So I'm particularly interested this time to know what others think.<br /><br /><b>David</b><br />Thanks again.<br /><br /><b>Kipling</b><br />The age old fantasy... yes, I agree.<br /><br /><b>Delaine</b><br />More power to you. That's really worth doing. Hope it all goes very well - as I'm sure it will.<br /><br /><b>Karen</b><br />I'm rather fond of old Seuss, so I'm not offended. Thanks for the comment. Much appreciated.<br /><br /><b>120 Socks</b><br />Thanks for that. Sometimes - as here - some ines just <b>come</b> - and later, when the internal editor kicks in, you start to wonder about them. Good to have the reassurance.<br /><br /><b>Totalfeckineejit</b><br />Much appreciate the comment - as, indeed, I appreciated the prompt. Both great.<br /><br /><b>Kass</b><br />A double act! Double the fun! Sounds tops. Thanks for the comment.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-82902907153764334412011-01-18T01:44:40.684+00:002011-01-18T01:44:40.684+00:00If I Superman you, will you Wonder Woman me?
That...If I Superman you, will you Wonder Woman me?<br /><br />That was a rollickingly good poem.Kasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233330248952156754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-30126858250105480582011-01-17T19:22:11.274+00:002011-01-17T19:22:11.274+00:00So many good lines, Dave, I'm with 120 socks a...So many good lines, Dave, I'm with 120 socks above and also 'decomposing composing'<br />It's fun, phantasmagorical, and FANTASTIC! I likes it!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42680600210183451812011-01-17T19:05:46.404+00:002011-01-17T19:05:46.404+00:00Loved the lines, 'I'm a dolphin on land,an...Loved the lines, 'I'm a dolphin on land,an Einstein at sea -<br />in the air I'll be perfect,<br />these wings are for me.' Liked the last line as well.Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-88518363108477969672011-01-17T18:36:00.670+00:002011-01-17T18:36:00.670+00:00Love the structure of this - moving from hospital ...Love the structure of this - moving from hospital bed to next room to street...to the world. The rhythm is Seussian, which I think fits the subject perfectly.Please don't be offended by that; I mean no offense and wouldn't mind being compared to him myself!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-12781481180705485302011-01-17T17:43:13.683+00:002011-01-17T17:43:13.683+00:00Thanks, I have found a new venue for my writing, w...Thanks, I have found a new venue for my writing, working with my hospis patients, helping them leave a poem, story or special words to their family,there is magic in giving backDelainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17814991455746307546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-25263648469333738492011-01-17T17:01:26.452+00:002011-01-17T17:01:26.452+00:00Epic! The stuff of boy hood dreams. I loved the Ev...Epic! The stuff of boy hood dreams. I loved the Everyman' feel to it. The dream of being all things, to all, yet in reality confined to just one body 'decomposing'.Kiplinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14420207142240102298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-20239946502577059152011-01-17T14:33:23.802+00:002011-01-17T14:33:23.802+00:00Superb, Dave.Superb, Dave.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-48124994608327258662011-01-17T14:01:16.878+00:002011-01-17T14:01:16.878+00:00Superman Me! Everyman Me! This is an intense look ...Superman Me! Everyman Me! This is an intense look inside .. so full of energy, possibility!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-87935781949504479672011-01-17T14:00:01.631+00:002011-01-17T14:00:01.631+00:00Tabor
No, I don't think you did. I'm not s...<b>Tabor</b><br />No, I don't think you did. I'm not sure what's going on there!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-43782596943078040252011-01-17T13:51:12.951+00:002011-01-17T13:51:12.951+00:00I have read the poem twice...like it...then went t...I have read the poem twice...like it...then went to the link, not sure if I missed something?Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.com