tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post4830139137769971886..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: GneissDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-56595855214670123142013-06-06T15:38:54.061+01:002013-06-06T15:38:54.061+01:00miindlovemisery
Thank you so much the generous co...<b>miindlovemisery </b><br />Thank you so much the generous comment<br /><br /><b>Elephant's Child </b><br />I'm sure he will...<br /><br /><b>Tabor </b><br />You sure it wasn't the train that madde you sad? They do that to me.<br /><br /><b>undercaws </b><br />Welcome to my blog. My thanks to you for your lovely comment.<br /><br /><b>Mary </b><br />Thanks Mary. Much appreciate the comment.<br /><br /><b>Wolfsrosebud </b><br />ah, well, yes, perhaps... hadn't thought of that!<br /><br /><b>Brian </b><br />Thanks Brian, several useful observations there.<br /><br /><b>Tommaso </b><br />Good of you to say this. Useful to have your thoughts on it.<br /><br /><b>Cloudia </b><br />I'm sure you are right. Thanks for saying.<br /><br /><b>haricot </b><br />Yes, you're right. There is symbolism there.<br /><br /><b>jabblog </b><br />Thanks for.<br /><br /><b>Ygraine </b><br />Yes, now wouldn't that be a result? And come to think of it...<br /><br /><b>Carol </b><br />Welcome and thanks for your contribution. Really good to have you aboard.<br /><br /><b>Magical Mystical Teacher </b><br />Many thanks for your kind comment. Good to have had your visit. Impressive blog you have.<br /><br /><b>Outlawyer </b><br />Ah, that blogger, what will he do next? Thanks for a great comment.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-27872433063199326452013-06-06T03:50:21.145+01:002013-06-06T03:50:21.145+01:00Oh very poignant, a real Yeatsian feel here. This...Oh very poignant, a real Yeatsian feel here. This is Karin btw, Manicddaily - sometimes blogger makes me use old blogger account. k. Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-76043321141894270122013-06-05T19:15:21.245+01:002013-06-05T19:15:21.245+01:00Well,my goodness, you've created magic with yo...Well,my goodness, you've created magic with your words here! Girls turning to gneiss? What next! Wow!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2013/06/02/a-whirl-with-stanley-kunitz/" rel="nofollow"><b> A Whirl with Stanley Kunitz</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-45646099639748526342013-06-05T15:19:30.231+01:002013-06-05T15:19:30.231+01:00The geological information woven through your poem...The geological information woven through your poem gives it realism. I liked the haunted ending and the echo of longing like a train's whistle far and far.Carol Steel https://www.blogger.com/profile/01331628292567383426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-50868971236436455472013-06-05T14:30:10.016+01:002013-06-05T14:30:10.016+01:00Oh, how wonderfully romantic!
If only he could be ...Oh, how wonderfully romantic!<br />If only he could be transported back forty years to a different outcome...Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-63262085348258180902013-06-05T11:07:27.121+01:002013-06-05T11:07:27.121+01:00Mystical. 'the blood has frozen solid in his l...Mystical. 'the blood has frozen solid in his limbs and heart' - shivers.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-44633240607133937892013-06-05T04:17:40.299+01:002013-06-05T04:17:40.299+01:00The tunnel like cave is symbolic and your words br...The tunnel like cave is symbolic and your words brought me a different sight at last.haricothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14052133324297115131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-62701356213769692492013-06-04T20:50:15.077+01:002013-06-04T20:50:15.077+01:00"More profoundly with each passing day."..."More profoundly with each passing day."<br /><br />Aye. That's where we are, what we share, mortal brother poet-<br /><br /><br />AlohaCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-84490001846685416032013-06-04T19:44:34.170+01:002013-06-04T19:44:34.170+01:00An impressive picture of longing.An impressive picture of longing.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-11716659901218434012013-06-04T13:17:04.545+01:002013-06-04T13:17:04.545+01:00really great imagery in this...the train always ca...really great imagery in this...the train always carries nostalgia for me...the introduction of the girl in this though is where the real story is....and you work it well...and the train keeps a rolling...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-15110877122715948872013-06-04T12:55:00.902+01:002013-06-04T12:55:00.902+01:00do think I heard the whistle... umm, so do I need ...do think I heard the whistle... umm, so do I need to be concerned regarding an engineer not focusing on his jobWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-83053391886665417122013-06-04T12:43:26.165+01:002013-06-04T12:43:26.165+01:00Wow, craving her so strongly still after 40 years....Wow, craving her so strongly still after 40 years....that is quite something. Loved this story, Dave, with its mysticism!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-675748761018943852013-06-04T12:29:13.751+01:002013-06-04T12:29:13.751+01:00The Throat sounds gorgeous. These rock formation p...The Throat sounds gorgeous. These rock formation provide a rich setting for your narrator's memories. Well done. You sent my iPhone to dictionary.com to look up gneiss. Great word for this context, it sounds texturally stunning. Thanks for sharing this Dave.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-67087003700336430642013-06-04T12:23:07.048+01:002013-06-04T12:23:07.048+01:00Did not see this coming. A turn and surprise that...Did not see this coming. A turn and surprise that made me sad as the train rushes on by.Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86756852772698898202013-06-04T12:07:14.490+01:002013-06-04T12:07:14.490+01:00I hope he finds a way to join her again...I hope he finds a way to join her again...Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42164385097489810822013-06-04T11:58:21.177+01:002013-06-04T11:58:21.177+01:00This is fantastic Dave the descriptions are gorgeo...This is fantastic Dave the descriptions are gorgeous I was really right there on the train taking in the scenery and the end loved it. I didn't even know this was for a wordle it was so seamless Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com