tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post6060050417646882289..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: FailureDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-72284259339789188052011-05-18T14:47:01.338+01:002011-05-18T14:47:01.338+01:00Well, I had a second reading ... and did not see t...Well, I had a second reading ... and did not see the end coming either. But I loved it. It brought up feelings of memory ... some sense of nostalgia and I was so happy ... and then clump! He jumped.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-83648785184435859482011-05-18T11:24:36.498+01:002011-05-18T11:24:36.498+01:00Jim
Thanks Jim. I find increasingly that I need s...<b>Jim</b><br />Thanks Jim. I find increasingly that I need second and third readings! Much appreciate the feedback.<br /><br /><b>jane</b><br />Thanks for that.<br /><br /><b>anthonynorth</b><br />Good to know you saw it that way. Thanks.<br /><br /><b>Corinna</b><br />Thanks for a useful comment.<br /><br /><b>Windsmoke</b><br />Pleasing. Thanks.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-5281707427357874722011-05-18T05:47:50.148+01:002011-05-18T05:47:50.148+01:00Very enjoyable indeed because of the surprise endi...Very enjoyable indeed because of the surprise ending which i didn't see coming at all :-).Windsmoke.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12225394580987872677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-3950485899745521972011-05-17T15:35:00.778+01:002011-05-17T15:35:00.778+01:00Nice snippet. Nicely woven together, the two soldi...Nice snippet. Nicely woven together, the two soldier stories.Corinnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14581819225069644563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-3777770482136301512011-05-17T15:03:03.710+01:002011-05-17T15:03:03.710+01:00Edgy with a great ending. Excellent.Edgy with a great ending. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-18888342366544675592011-05-17T09:30:07.966+01:002011-05-17T09:30:07.966+01:00I enjoyed this one David.I enjoyed this one David.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-52197224987288665352011-05-17T09:15:43.830+01:002011-05-17T09:15:43.830+01:00Did not see that ending coming. Mind you I should ...Did not see that ending coming. Mind you I should have. (A second reading always helps.) Quite effective this.<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.com