tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post6574519292568188615..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: Night and DayDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-55096222474142078422013-05-26T09:51:07.610+01:002013-05-26T09:51:07.610+01:00Poems hot off the brain are usually the ones I enj...Poems hot off the brain are usually the ones I enjoy most! Here's to many more of 'em...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-13442457392114074442013-05-26T05:59:36.593+01:002013-05-26T05:59:36.593+01:00Hi Dave the latest prompt is up if you want to par...Hi Dave the latest prompt is up if you want to participate again I very much enjoyed having you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-69977535206359859622013-05-25T11:57:42.987+01:002013-05-25T11:57:42.987+01:00Thanks Everyone as always for your most encouragin...Thanks <b>Everyone </b>as always for your most encouraging comments. I never cease to be amazed at the positives you manage to uncover, even in work about which I may be harbouring doubts. The poems are usually hot off the brain and I too close to them to make a reasoned judgement, so it is particularly good to have your feedback at such a time (whatever it may be). Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-65401164963216986232013-05-25T00:05:08.083+01:002013-05-25T00:05:08.083+01:00I heard Cole Porter in each refrain. Your poem fel...I heard Cole Porter in each refrain. Your poem felt like a call to arms to me.Vanessa Victoria Kilmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14923111066345543260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-27044974696465156542013-05-24T10:32:00.951+01:002013-05-24T10:32:00.951+01:00I love, love, love your poem. It's got rhythm ...I love, love, love your poem. It's got rhythm and chutzpah. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-69258962955017716052013-05-23T23:45:36.744+01:002013-05-23T23:45:36.744+01:00Beautiful Dave, specially the opening verse ~ the...Beautiful Dave, specially the opening verse ~ there is a rhythm as I read it out loud ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-54044302408685641062013-05-23T19:11:49.824+01:002013-05-23T19:11:49.824+01:00Beautiful answer. And even though my decade is the...Beautiful answer. And even though my decade is the fifties I remember the song.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-49325230398131502872013-05-23T18:13:36.988+01:002013-05-23T18:13:36.988+01:00That was fun.That was fun.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-12307751420712773392013-05-23T17:49:54.058+01:002013-05-23T17:49:54.058+01:00I especially enjoyed that first stanza! Great wor...I especially enjoyed that first stanza! Great work Dave :-)Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-11807160515792314882013-05-23T16:09:09.818+01:002013-05-23T16:09:09.818+01:00... p.s. ~~ 'behind' doesn't sound qui...... p.s. ~~ 'behind' doesn't sound quite right. You were ahead of me though ... I should have simply said the 40's.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-12213200837602376842013-05-23T15:42:08.306+01:002013-05-23T15:42:08.306+01:00Dave, I have lost count of how many times I've...Dave, I have lost count of how many times I've read your poem! Transported to another time, I'm one decade behind you .. those were the days, my friend.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-29312644849490950822013-05-23T15:03:31.180+01:002013-05-23T15:03:31.180+01:00This is fabulous!
It really should be set to music...This is fabulous!<br />It really should be set to music...it flows so beautifully and with such rhythm.<br />It would be the perfect tribute to Cole Porter's "Night and Day".<br />I love this.:)Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86999651168810226672013-05-23T13:16:53.479+01:002013-05-23T13:16:53.479+01:00nice....really like the repetition in this...and c...nice....really like the repetition in this...and cool rhythm man...you give form to that longing as well...cole porter is a great choice...mary nailed my fav lines in this.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-32174458304671670392013-05-23T12:31:38.468+01:002013-05-23T12:31:38.468+01:00This is a new style for you, Dave. I enjoyed the ...This is a new style for you, Dave. I enjoyed the playfulness with the Cole Porter song. it is a rhythmic read with a nice message. Favorite lines:<br /><br />I love a world made for love,<br />at the head of which stands you.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-91767470862081554102013-05-23T11:58:03.407+01:002013-05-23T11:58:03.407+01:00What an interesting idea and clever take on it. I...What an interesting idea and clever take on it. I am always surprised at your version.Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-23838732654688698572013-05-23T10:08:37.819+01:002013-05-23T10:08:37.819+01:00Great use of the prompt really like the flowGreat use of the prompt really like the flowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-1990121470469814522013-05-23T09:42:01.859+01:002013-05-23T09:42:01.859+01:00The is a fantastic David, I absolutely love the rh...The is a fantastic David, I absolutely love the rhytym and texture of the poem it gives it not only an amazing atmospheric vibe which I can visualize clearly but it also allows me to really hear the sound of your words in musical form. Its a very cool and very gorgeous piece. <br /><br />I am listening to the song write now =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com