tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post756002206745306303..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: 4 + 1Dave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86997114871454459062013-01-26T00:25:45.974+00:002013-01-26T00:25:45.974+00:00I love the line "...her thumb lies butterfly-...I love the line "...her thumb lies butterfly-like on hard bare knuckles." Such a perfect and beautiful image.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-57457380253892402122013-01-25T22:24:32.984+00:002013-01-25T22:24:32.984+00:00A lovely write Dave!!A lovely write Dave!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-71074304418528202402013-01-24T14:56:36.083+00:002013-01-24T14:56:36.083+00:00Love the butterfly-ness of her hand...lovely write...Love the butterfly-ness of her hand...lovely write, Dave...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-46397658744919179152013-01-23T21:31:44.124+00:002013-01-23T21:31:44.124+00:00Such sweetness here :) Really enjoyed the heart in...Such sweetness here :) Really enjoyed the heart in your words.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-72211580315396012962013-01-23T15:45:30.531+00:002013-01-23T15:45:30.531+00:00You really got to the heart of this one, Dave, wi...You really got to the heart of this one, Dave, with your well trained poets eye. Thanks mate Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-87702195275582536482013-01-23T12:02:39.009+00:002013-01-23T12:02:39.009+00:00I, too, have often gone gloveless in the depths of...I, too, have often gone gloveless in the depths of winter, just to hold my loved-one's hand...<br />and +1, well, have to side with Dad there. A glove is one thing, but hat? No way!!<br /><br />Super write Dave :)Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-43295448948257702422013-01-23T11:47:58.547+00:002013-01-23T11:47:58.547+00:00Thanks Everyone, so much. I felt a little overwhel...Thanks <b>Everyone, </b>so much. I felt a little overwhelmed by the response -- which i had not quite expected.<br /><br />So many of you have used the word "sweet" of my effort, that I am tempted to use it of you all. (I took it as a high compliment and I use it in that way.)Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-87245837200420299802013-01-23T11:19:33.938+00:002013-01-23T11:19:33.938+00:00Oh! This is wonderful! You spoke of the airiness, ...Oh! This is wonderful! You spoke of the airiness, lightness I sensed in their touch with your "two who hardly touch." Really tender piece, Dave. Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-1955884396961401942013-01-23T00:08:39.793+00:002013-01-23T00:08:39.793+00:00Lovely image and hopeful words. Thank you for havi...Lovely image and hopeful words. Thank you for having given warmth despite of coldness. I hope this action would be repeated on the globe, without gloves.haricothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14052133324297115131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-45776129034701411322013-01-22T22:22:48.940+00:002013-01-22T22:22:48.940+00:00Exquisite, I like it, it reminds me of childhood. ...Exquisite, I like it, it reminds me of childhood. Delicious poem.<br />Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-77245133605559292522013-01-22T21:18:55.856+00:002013-01-22T21:18:55.856+00:00Yes, in these cold days gloves lose out to touch.....Yes, in these cold days gloves lose out to touch...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-44283018705948393492013-01-22T20:58:38.006+00:002013-01-22T20:58:38.006+00:00I must believe their hands clasped together like t...I must believe their hands clasped together like this, will for sure be etched in their memories of it forever...we may forget words, but not true felt feelings...21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86537064827032165272013-01-22T19:04:48.344+00:002013-01-22T19:04:48.344+00:00The universe of hand in hand..great poetic reflect...The universe of hand in hand..great poetic reflection.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-25836843927887755602013-01-22T18:50:31.829+00:002013-01-22T18:50:31.829+00:00confound the stereotype of who is soft in the firs...confound the stereotype of who is soft in the first line. Sets up your own counter-cliche` hyper-noticing reality. . . . .I could go line by line, but will just return and enjoy it one more time. Gloves......did you enjoy our Inauguration yesterday as we have lately joined in your great celebrations?<br /><br /><br />Happy Aloha to YOU<br />from Honolulu, <br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ~ > < } } ( ° ><br /> > < } } ( ° ><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-10370097346840202392013-01-22T18:02:41.044+00:002013-01-22T18:02:41.044+00:00Sad for the kid...but a quite touching.Sad for the kid...but a quite touching.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-89840108876708044882013-01-22T17:55:39.312+00:002013-01-22T17:55:39.312+00:00are they now meeting
or about to take their leave
...are they now meeting<br />or about to take their leave<br />of one another<br /><br />Yes, are they meeting or going. Never thought of it that way. Love all 5 Dave!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-31950081608638592652013-01-22T17:51:45.046+00:002013-01-22T17:51:45.046+00:00Awww..I love the plus one. So sweet! Awww..I love the plus one. So sweet! Ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05867919018746028462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-38173777545606531462013-01-22T17:35:21.006+00:002013-01-22T17:35:21.006+00:00It is all about context isn't it? No assumptio...It is all about context isn't it? No assumptions on your part. Well done.Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09751363280115223716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-56000360731916791662013-01-22T17:31:28.212+00:002013-01-22T17:31:28.212+00:00As a hopeless romantic, I truly loved this :)As a hopeless romantic, I truly loved this :)Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-5560727115285387882013-01-22T16:58:48.864+00:002013-01-22T16:58:48.864+00:00Between you and me? I love wearing those gloves w...Between you and me? I love wearing those gloves with partially exposed fingers. All the better to touch with. <br /><br />That mean old Dad, what a spoil sport!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-72374824729819804442013-01-22T16:28:14.021+00:002013-01-22T16:28:14.021+00:00Happy belated new years Sir. And i see that you on...Happy belated new years Sir. And i see that you only better yourself with time. <br /><br />Rajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14521949812576502731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-91765383576820432812013-01-22T13:02:09.697+00:002013-01-22T13:02:09.697+00:00Ha - loved the plus one
And the other is very swe...Ha - loved the plus one<br /><br />And the other is very sweet - really very nice - the spliced and touch winning over gloves - very thoughtful and tender (with the a gentle bite of the real too.) k.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42263322650052147302013-01-22T12:54:26.608+00:002013-01-22T12:54:26.608+00:00OOps...hard not to think about it in the dead of w...OOps...hard not to think about it in the dead of winter!! (was what I intended to say)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-60984986159348027622013-01-22T12:53:48.646+00:002013-01-22T12:53:48.646+00:00A very sweet poem this morning, Dave! And yes, gl...A very sweet poem this morning, Dave! And yes, gloves DO lose out to the touch. (Hard not to think about that in the de!)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-43581102678109206292013-01-22T12:03:53.185+00:002013-01-22T12:03:53.185+00:00P.S. Liked your two Tankas...but the second one...P.S. Liked your two Tankas...but the second one's quite my fave...smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.com