tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post8536341856116554720..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: Out of the wood two women came.Dave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-49712612125578951502012-10-14T21:01:50.689+01:002012-10-14T21:01:50.689+01:00My head was bobbing up and down as I read it. It&#...My head was bobbing up and down as I read it. It's a beautiful piece that allows each reader to create its own rhytmic pattern. Loved the inclusion of "amor" and "antithesis". I imagine that as a poet you set yourself challenges. May I just say that you seem to overcome them very easily? :-)<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-5646387335636760432012-10-13T15:16:59.183+01:002012-10-13T15:16:59.183+01:00Aah yes, we women are the eternal shape shifters!
...Aah yes, we women are the eternal shape shifters!<br />But would a man want us any other way?<br />THAT is the million dollar question!!!Ygrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300519608303898969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-8401046628364407752012-10-13T11:33:49.516+01:002012-10-13T11:33:49.516+01:00haricot
No one knows who / what they be!
Shadow...<b>haricot </b><br />No one knows who / what they be!<br /><br /><b> Shadow</b><br />Thanks a lot! (Slightly unexpected!)<br /><br /><b>Other Mary </b><br />It did cross my mind, I must say, the men trying to figure women out bit!<br /><br /><b>Brian </b><br />I do agree - but glad you liked the rhythm. Thanks.<br /><br /><b>huperCRYPTICal </b><br />Thanks, but the important point is: can you figure out the two women? Personally, I wouldn't want to figure out women <i>per se</i>. Spoil all the fun!<br /><br /><b>Gerry </b><br />Thanks for saying. There are a wide range of meanings - a menu, in fact - from which the reader can select.<br /><br /><b>LInda </b><br />Good to hear. Thanks for saying.<br /><br /><b>The Weaver of Grass </b><br />Thanks. It's pleasing to hear that the rhyming helps. That was what I had hoped. I was without a post until the eleventh hour with this one. It rather came in a rush.<br /><br /><b>Eileen</b><br />Interesting. Thanks. When I was a boy we had a latge house near us. It had extensive grounds. No one - so far as I knew - had ever seen the occupants except as shadows on the blinds at night - and this was war time, mind! Two women - as far as we could tell. There were all sorts of tales - and we made up more!<br /><br /><b>Wolfsrosebud </b><br />Desperation was the inspiration. I had nothing to post! Thanks for the comment.<br /><br /><b>Mary </b><br />I go along with that.<br /><br /><b>Cloudia </b><br />You say the nicest things - for which, thanks. Have a great weekend yourself.<br /><br /><br />Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-64563664993103422322012-10-13T03:25:28.996+01:002012-10-13T03:25:28.996+01:00you bludgeon us joyfully with mad rhymes, and we l...you bludgeon us joyfully with mad rhymes, and we love it!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Have a Good Weekend,<br />Aloha from Waikiki<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° ><br /><br /><br /><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-41919290346482477192012-10-13T01:01:27.373+01:002012-10-13T01:01:27.373+01:00"both were evil and both were good" soun..."both were evil and both were good" sounds to me like the stuff of real life. I think we are all in that same boat!!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-82548056944681482012012-10-13T00:47:48.895+01:002012-10-13T00:47:48.895+01:00intense write for you... so much drama and great f...intense write for you... so much drama and great flow... wonder what inspired the piecWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-25230739403892531962012-10-13T00:47:42.248+01:002012-10-13T00:47:42.248+01:00intense write for you... so much drama and great f...intense write for you... so much drama and great flow... wonder what inspired the piecWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86662706424562808592012-10-12T21:48:53.283+01:002012-10-12T21:48:53.283+01:00Dave,
There is a shiver of an early Halloween app...Dave,<br /><br />There is a shiver of an early Halloween appearance of the goulish pair....I am also reminded of three occupants of a chateau in France, near to where I visit. A man and two women,mother and daughter. No-one locally knows the true set-up, but it is as scary as your two creatures from the woods:)<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-23730148575295662992012-10-12T19:04:07.205+01:002012-10-12T19:04:07.205+01:00My goodness me Dave - there is mystery here and I ...My goodness me Dave - there is mystery here and I think the rhyming helps considerably. Well done. I don't know how you keep up this flow of poetry.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-14097522367456515482012-10-12T18:29:50.935+01:002012-10-12T18:29:50.935+01:00I love this one, Dave.I love this one, Dave.Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12692170857496442623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-29854908549817494502012-10-12T15:07:54.852+01:002012-10-12T15:07:54.852+01:00oh I love this one ...what a story and what does i...oh I love this one ...what a story and what does it mean?...no it doesn't matter what for the rhythm and rhyme have me in it's clutches!!Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-80539133196553238272012-10-12T12:37:30.991+01:002012-10-12T12:37:30.991+01:00Excellent Dave - love the rhyme and rythmic flow.
...Excellent Dave - love the rhyme and rythmic flow.<br /><br />Women are easy to figure out Dave - men just don't have the ability to understand our complexities (as they are too wrapped up in their own)... :o]<br /><br />I do so love men but can't figure them out either...<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-21588301711277361482012-10-12T11:54:03.222+01:002012-10-12T11:54:03.222+01:00haha i hear what mary is is saying...i think we wi...haha i hear what mary is is saying...i think we will struggle in figuring them out for eternity...lol...nice rhyme and rhythm dave....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-2285025247602510392012-10-12T11:35:32.228+01:002012-10-12T11:35:32.228+01:00This has a mysterious, mythic feel to it, and wond...This has a mysterious, mythic feel to it, and wonderful rhyme and flow, as shadow said. I'll refrain from making a joke about men hopelessly trying to figure out women...but it's not easy! ;-)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-68228581585106031912012-10-12T11:14:40.314+01:002012-10-12T11:14:40.314+01:00the rhyme, the rhythm, the flow, the imagines, Dav...the rhyme, the rhythm, the flow, the imagines, Dave, you've got a gem here...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-4389495308898676422012-10-12T10:36:32.667+01:002012-10-12T10:36:32.667+01:00Who are they? Goddess or witchs who control the su...Who are they? Goddess or witchs who control the sun and the moon?<br />Beautiful lines and charming two silhouetes.haricothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14052133324297115131noreply@blogger.com