tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post8561501862389026415..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: WAR AND PEACEfulnessDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-80829115416291527702013-01-02T22:12:45.566+00:002013-01-02T22:12:45.566+00:00I love this, I think you have written a masterpiec...I love this, I think you have written a masterpiece of absurdist 3D poetry (with your tongue in cheek no less. It brought to mind the beginning of Jose Saramago's The Stone Raft. Your deft weaving of velleity was particularly fascinating.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42746639284563813392013-01-02T03:30:32.766+00:002013-01-02T03:30:32.766+00:00Ha! Now you have captured in a nutshell what I th...Ha! Now you have captured in a nutshell what I think about some experimental writing - it needs a narrative to sustain a longer story. Here you actually have a narrative - your writing of your novel - which seems a much more interesting process that the not-spoken plot! <br /><br />Very clever. <br /><br />i.e. a rose is a rose is a rose - sounds good in principal but could you read pages of it!!!!!! k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-1872053289512052802012-12-30T23:47:55.334+00:002012-12-30T23:47:55.334+00:00I am a bit worried about the bunnies with knives. ...I am a bit worried about the bunnies with knives. I don't believe that anything with a knife can be said to have no voiltion. They seemed a tad malevolent as they waited.<br />Brilliant piece Dave, I was glued to every word.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-59118077687921986892012-12-29T13:08:35.353+00:002012-12-29T13:08:35.353+00:00But that can be the story - a silence where boring...But that can be the story - a silence where boring happens ....John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-10496694620780276372012-12-29T12:10:02.931+00:002012-12-29T12:10:02.931+00:00anotherwanderingsoul
And a Wow from me - thanks f...<b>anotherwanderingsoul </b><br />And a Wow from me - thanks for.<br /><br /><b>Brian </b><br />Thanks Brian. Yes, good to be back, even though I was kept away by all the right things. Not fully back in the flow yet, though.<br /><br /><b>Grace </b><br />Yes, you have it exactly: everything stalled, conflict and casualties and the rabbit peeling. Thanks for picking out those three. And a great New Year to you and yours.<br /><br /><b>Laurie </b><br />Intriguing prompt, I thought. Thanks.<br /><br /><b>Hank </b><br />much thanks for saying this.<br /><br /><b>Mary </b><br />Ah well, speech is just words, you know! Thanks for the comment.<br /><br /><b>Claudia </b><br />Wow, did I really do all that? Seriously, though, very grateful for the response.<br /><br /><b>Cloudia </b><br />Bunny Godot? However did you know that? yup! And thanks for a great comment.<br /><br /><b>lucychili </b><br />Ah, but what if the fruit alone had volition? Wouldn't that change things? Good to know your thoughts. Thanks for saying.<br /><br /><b>jasmine </b><br />Much thanks for saying so. Very reassuring.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-81161659549198288172012-12-29T04:52:05.998+00:002012-12-29T04:52:05.998+00:00I LOVE this, Dave. Fantastic. Just my kind of thin...I LOVE this, Dave. Fantastic. Just my kind of thing.jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-61065423100651105712012-12-29T04:49:28.784+00:002012-12-29T04:49:28.784+00:00i think your fruit are the only characters I can s...i think your fruit are the only characters I can see without volition, perhpas even they want to be peeled, or not?lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-62514855011557619082012-12-28T22:58:38.436+00:002012-12-28T22:58:38.436+00:00It is a privilege to visit your head.
Waiting for...It is a privilege to visit your head.<br /><br />Waiting for Bunny Godot?<br /><br /><br />Friday Aloha from Honolulu, <br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> ~ > < } } ( ° ><br /> > < } } ( ° ><br />> < 3 3 3 ( ' > <br /> <br /> ><}}(°> ~<br />~ ~ ~ <°)333><( ~ ~ ~Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-54856183469393195752012-12-28T17:06:09.177+00:002012-12-28T17:06:09.177+00:00this is just wonderful dave...my new fav by you......this is just wonderful dave...my new fav by you...you take the random to the random to the random and by doing this, shift it right to the center...gorgeousClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-31702527623941545402012-12-28T13:40:39.643+00:002012-12-28T13:40:39.643+00:00I think I would have a hard time reading this nove...I think I would have a hard time reading this novel with no one speaking.<br /><br />Welcome back.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-9386404423704805612012-12-28T13:35:07.901+00:002012-12-28T13:35:07.901+00:00A novel where lots left to how one imagines. No wo...A novel where lots left to how one imagines. No words, no movements nor music. This is fun. It takes the whole imagining process to a higher level. Brilliant Dave!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-23201563958095408682012-12-28T13:28:30.825+00:002012-12-28T13:28:30.825+00:00Intriguing, Dave.Intriguing, Dave.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-33231944898848118132012-12-28T13:26:57.407+00:002012-12-28T13:26:57.407+00:00I like the creative idea of writing where nobdy sp...I like the creative idea of writing where nobdy speaks, no movement nor music, like everything is stalled. Yet there is conflict and casualties - that part of the rabbit peeling was novelty ~<br /><br />Good one Dave ~<br /><br />Happy New Year ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-18755167992558962232012-12-28T13:20:38.072+00:002012-12-28T13:20:38.072+00:00haha, the crows picking over the christmas debris,...haha, the crows picking over the christmas debris, i wonder a bit at the symbolism there you know...i really should not be commenting as there is no speaking, but then again...smiles.<br /><br />it is good to see you man...you have been missed. hope the holidays were good to you.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86933973904036248982012-12-28T12:56:51.115+00:002012-12-28T12:56:51.115+00:00wow, Dave... truly fascinating.wow, Dave... truly fascinating.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com