tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post8781900533176427213..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: CataractDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-37866804379563500052011-05-12T12:51:23.580+01:002011-05-12T12:51:23.580+01:00love the soft conceptual world
and the shift to th...love the soft conceptual world<br />and the shift to the real<br />great poemlucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-4300649836609516472011-05-11T09:22:58.461+01:002011-05-11T09:22:58.461+01:00Tommaso
Absolutely. I llike the idea of poems doin...<b>Tommaso</b><br />Absolutely. I llike the idea of poems doing a bit of social networking.<br /><br /><b>Liz</b><br />Good to have you commenting Liz. I enjoyed reading your remarks and, yes, I too had an (inward) laugh at the curly kale, though it did do much to reassure at the time.<br /><br /><b>Windsmoke</b><br />Good to know you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback.<br /><br /><b>Conda</b><br />That's most interesting. Thanks for coming back to me with it. Very useful feedback indeed.<br /><br /><b>Jingle</b><br />Many thanks for the response. Much appreciated.<br /><br /><b>Cloudia</b><br />Always great to hear from you.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-83520870498366673562011-05-11T04:25:44.303+01:002011-05-11T04:25:44.303+01:00"Archived images"
illuminating, Dave
..."Archived images"<br /><br /><br />illuminating, Dave<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /> Aloha from Waikiki<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /><br />><}}(°><br /><br /> <br /> ><}}(°><br /><br /><°)}}><Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-50069163199726192722011-05-11T03:52:20.275+01:002011-05-11T03:52:20.275+01:00creative write...
beautiful and dynamic imagery.creative write...<br /><br />beautiful and dynamic imagery.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-40361297023578651962011-05-11T03:52:08.709+01:002011-05-11T03:52:08.709+01:00creative write...
beautiful and dynamic imagery.creative write...<br /><br />beautiful and dynamic imagery.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-38974635016960426832011-05-11T00:53:58.128+01:002011-05-11T00:53:58.128+01:00Dave, I like how you're now working with a dif...Dave, I like how you're now working with a different form. It works quite well with this poem, as I read it I noticed my eyes in motion, cool.Conda Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12972790965426924941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-31779464936867927802011-05-10T23:42:32.411+01:002011-05-10T23:42:32.411+01:00Very enjoyable indeed :-).Very enjoyable indeed :-).Windsmoke.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12225394580987872677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-10729492071650579992011-05-10T21:29:28.466+01:002011-05-10T21:29:28.466+01:00You have mede me contemplate upon the numerous way...You have mede me contemplate upon the numerous ways in which people see, and how each new manner of seeing can bring a different perspective. MAkes me think though briefly of Quantum Theory. And I echo the first respondent ... I too appreciate the "layout." Then I got a great laugh at "curly kale."Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-55779350141706559972011-05-10T19:10:20.337+01:002011-05-10T19:10:20.337+01:00I will put again my poem "eyelines" in t...I will put again my poem "eyelines" in the blog to converse with this haunting one of yours.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-35230943817680599242011-05-10T18:50:12.583+01:002011-05-10T18:50:12.583+01:00imnotaverse
Thanks a lot for the commentt. Good fe...<b>imnotaverse</b><br />Thanks a lot for the commentt. Good feedback.<br /><br /><b>David</b><br />Thanks David. Much appreciate that.<br /><br /><b>Silke</b><br />Hi and a warm welcome to my blog. Thanks for visiting and for stopping by to comment.<br /><br /><b>Mary</b><br />You are right, yes. I had two operations a couple of years apart. They were somewhat different as I experienced them. The poem owes something to each of them. It was inpart composed during the first and then modified during the second, but it was some time before I wrote anything down. Then I promptly forgot about it - and recently came across it. Almost a "found" poem at that stage!<br /><br /><b>Helen</b><br />Hi. Thanks for visiting. Really good to have you with us. That is a lovely thing to say. I am really touched. Hope evrything goes swimmingly well for your sister.<br /><br /><b>Corinna</b><br />Yup, could have been either. Just happened to be surgery. The gossipping of the surgical team buoyed me up no end. It told me that nothing was going amis.<br /><br /><b>Linda</b><br />Thanks for those kind words and a warm welcome to you. Good to have you along.<br /><br /><b>Hannah</b><br />I'm very pleased. You are quite right, of course: it is experiment, and I don't know how long it will last, but at the moment, I, too am enjoying it. Thanks for the observation.<br /><br /><b>brenda w</b><br />And it is really good to have your comments. They are much appreciated.<br /><br /><b>Titus</b><br />Thems great words!! Thank you for them.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-18387803247420934812011-05-10T18:19:31.706+01:002011-05-10T18:19:31.706+01:00No great words Dave, that's just a beautiful p...No great words Dave, that's just a beautiful piece of writing.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-33544900620085454842011-05-10T15:48:03.570+01:002011-05-10T15:48:03.570+01:00This is beautiful on the page, Dave. I love where ...This is beautiful on the page, Dave. I love where it takes me. Your work makes me think. I'm happy to have found you.<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42037737136760789092011-05-10T15:22:57.861+01:002011-05-10T15:22:57.861+01:00I'm enjoying the gaps and your experimentation...I'm enjoying the gaps and your experimentation with form.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-76346364694775306222011-05-10T15:22:43.066+01:002011-05-10T15:22:43.066+01:00What beautiful poetry!....whether it is photograph...What beautiful poetry!....whether it is photography or poetry, light is the significant fiber that intertwines us all...I love this, thanks for sharing, LindaLindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15079960378225346135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-44560073319454405832011-05-10T14:45:29.903+01:002011-05-10T14:45:29.903+01:00I had imagined an afternoon doze in a hammock, wit...I had imagined an afternoon doze in a hammock, with maybe a towel thrown over the face for shade, eavesdropping on the family conversations from the front porch. Lovely all the same, surgery or nap.Corinnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14581819225069644563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-68283162309519309702011-05-10T14:39:39.304+01:002011-05-10T14:39:39.304+01:00My sister is having cataract surgery in a few week...My sister is having cataract surgery in a few weeks .... this poem is a must for her to read.<br />Beautifully told.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-90685333317915428172011-05-10T13:31:02.462+01:002011-05-10T13:31:02.462+01:00There is so much depth in this poem, as you weave ...There is so much depth in this poem, as you weave your way through it with words. Am I right in perceiving you were writing about the experience of having cataract surgery...reliving thoughts as it was happening? I remember something similar when I had toe surgery..sights, sounds, discussions, while they were working away on my toe!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-16455473395711595362011-05-10T11:32:08.644+01:002011-05-10T11:32:08.644+01:00Thanks for your visit to my blog, Dave!! :) What a...Thanks for your visit to my blog, Dave!! :) What a way you have with words - I admire that!! Especially poetry, which has always eluded me... Warm greetings from Savannah! SilkeSilke Powershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094855019089665976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-90578627764586829292011-05-10T11:17:15.810+01:002011-05-10T11:17:15.810+01:00Very nice cadence here, Dave.Very nice cadence here, Dave.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-25904731927298667432011-05-10T09:39:06.567+01:002011-05-10T09:39:06.567+01:00I like the layout of this poem, the way it exempli...I like the layout of this poem, the way it exemplifies the last stanza perfectly.<br /><br />My favourite line:<br /><br />the character<br />of poems from another tongueAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com