Monday, 22 March 2010

Haiku #88

Blackbirds are in song.
   Life span three years maximum -
 yet they keep singing.

14 comments:

  1. We should all be so focused on the brighter side of life.

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  2. I didn't know they get to live so long! This was wonderful. You seem to have an extra "three" in there.

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  3. Oh, I love this! Keep singing.

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  4. The Beatles 'sang' it best ... 'you were only waiting for this moment to be free' .........

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  5. Yeah, I'm surprised by their life span myself.

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  6. Their life span is longer than flies. I'm sure that's why their singing.

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  7. Strong, enduring blackbirds,
    keep singing, you'll carry us
    from now to then.


    BLACKBIRD

    In the blinding sunlight
    its blackness staring on the stone slab
    over the iron gate, and behind
    a branch in bloom. As in front of the Kaaba
    you behold the inner white heart,
    the grip of the spotless iris of the start
    and the red beak,
    the unshielded first impact
    with the sky of things.

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  8. A belligerent lot, blackbirds. I see them fighting and chasing each other in the garden.
    But their lyrical song makes up for all the aggression.

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  9. Do they really care
    that their place on the hit parade
    will be so short-lived?

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  10. I had no idea how long a blackbird lived for. Nice to learn something new :o)

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  12. Tabor
    Agreed 100%!

    Enchanted Oak
    Thanks for pointing that out. - A crude attempt on my part to double their life expectancy!

    Dorraine
    I only sing to myself - not a nice experience for others!

    Helen
    They did indeed.

    Kass
    Yes.

    David
    I was, when I came across it. It's actually given as 2 to 3 years. I'm ever the optimist.

    Ronda
    Or it's longer han flies because they sing.

    Tommaso
    Well said.
    Enjoyed the poem. Thanks.

    Friko
    It's the artistic temperament, you know.

    Meri
    Not once they've got their platinums, I don't suppose they do.

    Niki
    Welcome to the blog. Good to have you commenting.
    I'd just learnt it also - just passing it on.

    Anonymous
    Thanks - and hope your use of it brings success.

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  13. I love this as well. It's very "Zen".

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