Ethel was my friend and I was proud to know him.
His mother called him Jud,
the name she'd given at his Christening,
but no one else could call him that.
The last to try still carried a black eye.
No, Ethel was his chosen name --
or rather, Ethelred, although the red
had quickly fallen out of use.
Why Ethel/Ethelred? Why that?
His second name was Mudd!
He was a proud man and his chest would swell
whenever -- and they sometimes did -- his friends
would rattle off his full address:
Ethel Mudd
Furnace Man,
The Gasworks
Love Lane
Tadnam --
where, as it happened, I'd been sent
to see what I could paint. That's how we met.
He watched me for a bit, then asked
if I would draw him at his fire.
Of course, I said I would -- and he went wild,
as if his team had won the cup. He asked:
And with that charcoal you were using, eh?
"Certainly," I said.
I'm off to wash me face!
"You're not, you know! Just don't you dare!"
and then explained, as best I could
the soot was part of him and what he did.
Gave character. He didn't understand,
but did agree -- and liked the Portrait when
I'd finished it. And in your paintin' Guvnor,
show me at my fire? "Well no....
I drew you yesterday..." showed him again
the drawing that would go into the work.
"You're doing up your bootlace... you recall?"
Oh, he recalled alright, but floundered
when he tried to understand...
Why would I rather have him doing that
than stoking up his fire?
I pointed on the drawing to the way
his muscles tensed and shaped the back and legs,
the lines of stress that ran down through his form,
how figures in the background echoed this --
as did the open furnace door, its shadow
and the flames.... And I can do all that,
he gasped by tying up my boot! -- I must
be quite a special man, at that!
"Ethel," I said, "You are, you surely are!"
We sent each other Christmas cards for years.
And painted by another special man. Happy Christmas Ethel, happy Christmas Dave.
ReplyDeleteGreat friends can start from being great models. How nice, Dave! Chuckles! You have that special knack of extending wit in your poem. I just love it!
ReplyDeleteHank
Oh Dave - this brought tears to my eyes - you painted such a picture of a special man.
ReplyDeletevery very cool...just love how you capture him dave
ReplyDeletesmiles....very cool capture...i like how you chose to draw him tying his shoe and how youwere able to show him how even doing that made the moment special
ReplyDeleteDave- a wonderful portrait both in your drawing and in your post. Thank you for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteCarl
Interesting writing that you were painting the man and you also show the drawing by description, as we can see the man through a lenze of photographer who captures the scene.
ReplyDeleteA very touching portrait of this man, Dave! Well drawn.....
ReplyDeleteYou drew him very well, specially with details of the last stanza ~
ReplyDeleteI'm always awed by your work Dave ~
Cheers ~
He sounds like quite a guy.
ReplyDeleteAmazing capture in your poetry Dave.
YOU are a most wonderful person, D
ReplyDeleteWeekend Aloha from Honolulu
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ReplyDeleteI just would like to give a huge thumbs up for the great info you have here on this post. I will be coming back to your blog for more soon.
man and van byfleet
Through the eyes of the artist .. only you, Dave.
ReplyDeletewhat a great example of how two very different people touch each others' lives and come away far richer.
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ReplyDeleteMuch thanks -- and a very Happy Christmas to you and yours.
Hank
You've said it!
The Weaver of Grass
Touching comment. Thank you very much.
Claudia
Thank you for saying so.
Brian
I think what really nailed it was me pointing out that he would be the foreground figure - larger then all the rest!
Carl
Thank you so much for this comment.
haricot
And an interesting observation. You've set me thinking. Much thanks.
Mary
Thank you so much.
Grace
It's always good to hear your thoughts. Thanks very much.
Daydreamer too
He was quite a guy. A rare mixture - maybe that's what drew me to him.
Cloudia
Most kind comment. Thank you very much.
Wasim
You are most welcome. Thanks for your visit.
Helen
Really kind remark. I'm very touched by it. Thank you.
Tabor
Yes, I think I'd have to agree that by any criteria we were chalk and cheese. It didn't seem to matter. Thank you.
Moved me to tears, Dave.
ReplyDeleteHow you captured this special man in your very special way will remain etched into my memory forever!
So touching :)
Dave, every time i come here, i look forward to reading something special.
ReplyDeleteyou never disappoint.
you've got such talent, such a keen eye for detail, for vividness... you know how to shape words and bring them to life inside your readers.
this is marvelous... yet again. loved how you captured him, what a great poem.
thank you.
What a wonderful poem about friendship the place each of us occupies on earth. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.