tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post1826922530395993908..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: The Almost LoversDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-75298010862134818692008-08-14T11:29:00.000+01:002008-08-14T11:29:00.000+01:00Thanks for that Jim. I understand about reformatti...Thanks for that Jim. I understand about reformatting, in fact it seems a useful dodge that I might use myself in future. Don't know why I haven't thought of doing it, but there you go: the obvious is sometimes the most difficult to spot.<BR/>It wasn't meant to solve anything - the next one is supposed to do that, but don't hold your breath. Thanks for the typo tip.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-26966827070779100662008-08-14T08:25:00.000+01:002008-08-14T08:25:00.000+01:00I enjoyed this a lot and it doesn't answer anythin...I enjoyed this a lot and it doesn't answer anything but it does add to the puzzle. I wasn't sure you'd be able to pull it off but you have, so well done. Once again I'm afraid I had to reformat the whole thing to read. I find I need a lot more white space these days and walls of text make me want to doze off. I have no particular criticisms. There was a typo I noticed (two its together near the end) but that was it.Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-60228728570691896462008-08-13T08:38:00.000+01:002008-08-13T08:38:00.000+01:00TommasoThe omens are certainly good for "scintilla...Tommaso<BR/>The omens are certainly good for "scintilla". Thanks for introducing it.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42388052707669647502008-08-12T19:31:00.000+01:002008-08-12T19:31:00.000+01:00Dear Dave, thank you for telling me about the "you...Dear Dave, thank you for telling me about the "you" a The Man Born Blind.<BR/>It's a quiet and intense poem about a subject that has always fascinated me, I think I lost the "wavelength" before the last line, it's very clear now that the "you" is the reader.<BR/>Now I am reading your longer poems.<BR/>I hope you'll enjoy "Scintilla", with Orbis it's the best British magazine among those I got to.<BR/>Best wishes, DavideTommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.com