tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post2602031248350480341..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: Reflections...Dave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-2706518882058709042013-03-25T10:44:02.618+00:002013-03-25T10:44:02.618+00:00I had to look up palimpsest - thanks for teaching ...I had to look up palimpsest - thanks for teaching me a new word! Once I understood the meaning, I loved that line! How a paper can be reused, shadows changing a room, and the many keys both can hold. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-50481561849609209022013-03-22T11:52:17.105+00:002013-03-22T11:52:17.105+00:00Thanks so much as always to Everyone for the trou...Thanks so much as always to <b>Everyone </b>for the trouble taken to leave your thoughts and kind words. Everything said is very much valued and thought about.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-42793015345050274812013-03-22T05:10:14.191+00:002013-03-22T05:10:14.191+00:00I feel as if I strayed into a huge kaleidoscope......I feel as if I strayed into a huge kaleidoscope...You captured well the elusive elements. Great!haricothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14052133324297115131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-49717465927951816452013-03-22T00:41:51.925+00:002013-03-22T00:41:51.925+00:00Everything in its place is ...yes and that does no...Everything in its place is ...yes and that does not work for reflections and sunlight for it goes where it wants to go<br />Nice poem!!artbyraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04153847801206823450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-83838115752045344762013-03-22T00:36:08.227+00:002013-03-22T00:36:08.227+00:00Wonderful. So cool. k.Wonderful. So cool. k.Manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-54518234582665882672013-03-21T23:00:47.543+00:002013-03-21T23:00:47.543+00:00I love the concertina world. And indeed, what IS ...I love the concertina world. And indeed, what IS the right place for memories, for reveries? I know not. Whirling by for me to catch by their tails perhaps.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-90683699622174064242013-03-21T22:15:31.795+00:002013-03-21T22:15:31.795+00:00I loved the ending:
All things are possible
wher...I loved the ending: <br /><br />All things are possible<br />where shadows fall <br />on rays of light.<br />This palimpsest of rooms has several keys.<br /><br />A lovely contrast between the shadows and the light. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-3617922022126404872013-03-21T22:09:56.808+00:002013-03-21T22:09:56.808+00:00All things are possible
where shadows fall
on ray...All things are possible<br />where shadows fall <br />on rays of light.<br /><br />Love this, the image that light makes everything possible. Great feeling and great words.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-28898216629337976322013-03-21T19:46:34.878+00:002013-03-21T19:46:34.878+00:00Oh Dave - pure brilliance - it plays to me. Lovel...Oh Dave - pure brilliance - it plays to me. Lovely.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-92222430993644667042013-03-21T19:27:59.288+00:002013-03-21T19:27:59.288+00:00A poem for contemplation. Sunglight and shadows I ...A poem for contemplation. Sunglight and shadows I can really share. Powerful final stanza.Tommaso Gervasuttinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-56503980834503324562013-03-21T18:21:24.557+00:002013-03-21T18:21:24.557+00:00Dave, these are wonderful reflections!! I will be...Dave, these are wonderful reflections!! I will be thinking of the concertina world. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-80858614025503504052013-03-21T18:12:01.553+00:002013-03-21T18:12:01.553+00:00A place for everything,
my mother said,
and everyt...A place for everything,<br />my mother said,<br />and everything in its place.<br /><br />Beautiful play of word craft, Dave! The opening itself is classic and it follows right through all the way. Fantastic!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-74562718309395411812013-03-21T17:38:08.583+00:002013-03-21T17:38:08.583+00:00ha. nice...the last line in this is really cool......ha. nice...the last line in this is really cool...the room and a number of keys...kinda like those memories...unlock some of those doors and it all comes spilling out...the use of concertina is cool in this as well..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-26084597765079093872013-03-21T17:36:57.155+00:002013-03-21T17:36:57.155+00:00I like this Dave. Wonderful word images!I like this Dave. Wonderful word images!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-21036395651494434662013-03-21T16:28:57.783+00:002013-03-21T16:28:57.783+00:00I particularly love the choice of picture to accom...I particularly love the choice of picture to accompany this poem...very apropos. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-33032852580373087612013-03-21T16:25:28.678+00:002013-03-21T16:25:28.678+00:00Concertina world as seen by natural, young, string...Concertina world as seen by natural, young, string theorist, mystic, who still see's much wisdom in the palimpsest others eyes never catch.<br /><br />Aloha, D<br /><br /><br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-39958293901431652962013-03-21T16:00:14.611+00:002013-03-21T16:00:14.611+00:00This is lovely, Dave. I especially like the second...This is lovely, Dave. I especially like the second stanza... what a wonderful view on life!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-43551812072676325872013-03-21T13:58:28.646+00:002013-03-21T13:58:28.646+00:00I also found the concept of a concertina world enc...I also found the concept of a concertina world enchanting .... lovely poem, Mr. Dave!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-73660903788896054752013-03-21T13:26:55.633+00:002013-03-21T13:26:55.633+00:00Oh my, you have truly caught the mental rolodex wh...Oh my, you have truly caught the mental rolodex whirl of reflecting on the past, the present, the future ... this IS a concertina world! Wonderful, David ... just wonderful.<br />STOP.Susan Lindquisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.com