tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post3546892869258934759..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: DecibelsDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-74104589862144221692011-04-14T12:50:50.630+01:002011-04-14T12:50:50.630+01:00A subtle change
of pressures in the air
frets thro...A subtle change<br />of pressures in the air<br />frets through the fine combs of the ear<br />and makes no greater stir<br />than would a wayward lock of hair.<br /><br />Alamost the sound of silence...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-69883350950293982552011-04-14T12:00:53.494+01:002011-04-14T12:00:53.494+01:00Ruth
Great to have you back visiting and commenti...<b>Ruth </b><br />Great to have you back visiting and commenting. As always, a most useful comment. Thanks for it.<br /><br /><b>Gerry </b><br />Really good of you to say so. Thanks.<br /><br /><b>Corinna</b><br />I got used to heavy metal when I worked for a while in an environment which included it. I ended up liking some, but not really a fan.<br /><br /><b>Pamela </b><br />They are, but it's Graham who should get the credit for the phrase. Thanks for your response.<br /><br /><b>Tommaso </b><br />Indeed, I can imagine those two poems chatting away over the garden wall, nineteen to the dozen! Much thanks for it.<br /><br /><b>Sailor </b><br />Nicely put. I like it!<br /><br /><b>Alliteration Poems </b><br />Welcome to the blog and grateful thanks for troubling to comment. Good to have you visiting, Marinela.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-51318398108895712432011-04-14T07:59:52.033+01:002011-04-14T07:59:52.033+01:00This is wonderful poem, Dave!
Your writing is trul...This is wonderful poem, Dave!<br />Your writing is truly inspiring :)<br />Take Care<br />Marinela <br /><a href="http://marinelareka.com/" rel="nofollow">Short Poems</a>Alliteration Poemshttp://marinelareka.com/?category_name=alliteration-poems%E2%80%8Fnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-46111976377033725642011-04-14T00:14:54.308+01:002011-04-14T00:14:54.308+01:00I like the whisper in your tone.I like the whisper in your tone.Sebabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14378499293459799495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-18693661700983383492011-04-13T19:31:08.604+01:002011-04-13T19:31:08.604+01:00EARPLUGS
They open up the noise inside,
a grindin...EARPLUGS<br /><br />They open up the noise inside,<br />a grinding, transparent and sharp,<br />a sound <br />that can tear you apart.<br />A god’s belly<br />with red walls, too alive.<br />The hole of your identity,<br />its silence<br />and howl, amplified.<br />An ocean exploding<br />with the wings of a bird,<br />a sky just sensed<br />that must remain unheard.<br /><br /><br />This old poem of mine maybe can talk with this latest of yours which I have thoroughly enjoyed.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-75131573506825686072011-04-13T18:25:55.665+01:002011-04-13T18:25:55.665+01:00The sounds of nature are quite musical, Dave, quit...The sounds of nature are quite musical, Dave, quite beautifully put.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-82404015061725657472011-04-13T16:28:39.124+01:002011-04-13T16:28:39.124+01:00I hate heavy metal. It affronts my ears. I have ve...I hate heavy metal. It affronts my ears. I have very good friends who have great taste in music who love it though, so I respect it as an art form. I loved this poem...it was even better when I read it from the bottom stanza up to the first.Corinnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14581819225069644563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-15701756870734211702011-04-13T14:34:42.156+01:002011-04-13T14:34:42.156+01:00A wonderful subject to write about and once again ...A wonderful subject to write about and once again you find such a great way to describe that.Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-72660911581946383312011-04-13T12:43:29.529+01:002011-04-13T12:43:29.529+01:00Ah Dave, it's good to be back here with your i...Ah Dave, it's good to be back here with your incredible poesy!<br /><br />This wonderful poem makes me think, and feel, of capacity, how we are wired differently, each of us, but we can be open in all the senses to the new and "other." <br /><br />Those last three lines just send me:<br /><br /><i>so magnify for me the sound of birds<br />and cherish above all,<br />the sound of love.</i>Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-31527768703434432022011-04-13T10:46:27.173+01:002011-04-13T10:46:27.173+01:00Isabel
Hi! Thanks for those comments. No, I confes...<b>Isabel</b><br />Hi! Thanks for those comments. No, I confess I haven't read "Deaf Sentence", but if it's by David Lodge I obviously ought to!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-27198160305717057802011-04-13T09:40:16.864+01:002011-04-13T09:40:16.864+01:00ps have you read David Lodge's Deaf Sentence?ps have you read David Lodge's Deaf Sentence?Isabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-61284783865564571982011-04-13T09:39:30.757+01:002011-04-13T09:39:30.757+01:00excellent poem Mr King - heartfelt,musical, scient...excellent poem Mr King - heartfelt,musical, scientific, poetic - it pushes all the buttons!<br /><br />and the secret word is 'flovab', which somehow seems appropriateIsabel Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17974989548030799086noreply@blogger.com