tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post5569970543687122477..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: First Car, First LoveDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-23109434740320065132010-07-21T10:51:17.239+01:002010-07-21T10:51:17.239+01:00Wow, Dave! This is enigmatic and poignant and gooo...Wow, Dave! This is enigmatic and poignant and goood!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-8119021982340238002010-07-20T09:23:49.232+01:002010-07-20T09:23:49.232+01:00Enchanted Oak
Me lips is sealed. I'm no kiss a...<b>Enchanted Oak</b><br />Me lips is sealed. I'm no kiss and tell guy!<br />Mine is angst, if you like - yours, sheer ecstacy.<br /><br /> <b>Weaver</b><br />Doubly sad, with the car having to go - the shiny red trike hardly made up for it.<br /><br /><b>Jeanne Iris</b><br />Welcome Jeanne and thanks for the observations. I agree with you completely on the oil.<br /><br /><b>Peter</b><br />Many thanks.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-87447319126481904242010-07-20T06:45:02.378+01:002010-07-20T06:45:02.378+01:00Love the four battered knees - rhyme and rhythm we...Love the four battered knees - rhyme and rhythm well maintained throughoutPeter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-29800461645192772502010-07-19T23:39:58.706+01:002010-07-19T23:39:58.706+01:00Sad poem in your Tunnel of Unrequited Love. The oi...Sad poem in your Tunnel of Unrequited Love. The oil statistic only reflects what so many of us in the U.S. feel: the desperate need for change. We must keep in mind that we are stewards of this planet, and the now thousands of sea life that has perished in this ecological disaster.Dr. Jeanne Irishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11277286531162894465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-9542346486895893762010-07-19T17:47:50.975+01:002010-07-19T17:47:50.975+01:00A sad tale indeed DaveA sad tale indeed DaveThe Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-59755194983336217712010-07-19T16:10:32.049+01:002010-07-19T16:10:32.049+01:00I want to know what happened!!!!
It was full of an...I want to know what happened!!!!<br />It was full of angst, this Bus ticket. Nice work, Davey.<br /><a href="http://chrisalba-enchantedoak.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Masochistic Rhythms</a>Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-86776855061354391232010-07-19T11:38:18.406+01:002010-07-19T11:38:18.406+01:00Argent
Thanks and welcome to the blog. You have to...<b>Argent</b><br />Thanks and welcome to the blog. You have to take some of the credit for your inspirational prompt.<br /><br /><b>Kass</b><br />I agree: the oil stats do lack bounce!<br /><br /><b>Erratic Thoughts</b><br />A warm welcome to you and my thanks for your comments. They are much appreciated.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-88907200540272512632010-07-19T11:11:15.627+01:002010-07-19T11:11:15.627+01:00This is lovely...
Remarkabale...
"Two loves l...This is lovely...<br />Remarkabale...<br />"Two loves lost to a single blow,<br />a world of sunshine turned to snow." OMG..simply Brilliant :)<br />~CheersErratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-59372036485606799372010-07-19T10:14:43.448+01:002010-07-19T10:14:43.448+01:00Loved the poem. It bounced along with lightness an...Loved the poem. It bounced along with lightness and bemusement. Oil stats - not so much.Kasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233330248952156754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-70953952861512999192010-07-19T10:06:54.589+01:002010-07-19T10:06:54.589+01:00I love rhyming poems and this one was really good!...I love rhyming poems and this one was really good! The rhythm of it was really attractive to me.Argenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532506690426639326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-67649310061345519272010-07-19T09:44:53.223+01:002010-07-19T09:44:53.223+01:00jinksy
Bless you!
pilgrimchick
Hi, welcome and ma...<b>jinksy</b><br />Bless you!<br /><br /><b>pilgrimchick</b><br />Hi, welcome and many thanks for the comments.<br /><br /><b>Gwei</b><br />Yes, bitter sweet expresses it exactly, I think.<br /><br /><b>Conda</b><br />I hardly ever use rhyme (end rhyme, that is) if I'm being totally serious, mostly just for fun. As for the oil, I wonder what the stats would be for Europe (say)?<br /><br /><b>Helen</b><br />That's life I guess - fun and no fun!<br /><br /><b>Lucas</b><br />Believe it or not, I had all but forgotten it until I came across a photograph of me in it a while ago - no sign of Pam, though.<br /><br /><b>steven</b><br />I remember an uncle of mine warning me about minis when I was learning to drive - <i>They're like virgins - bloody hard to get into and no fun when you're there!</i> I can't say that's been my experienc - but about which, I will not say.<br /><br /><b>Totalfeckineejit</b><br />Yes, I thought the stat incredible - almost unbelievable. Bu thanks fr the remarks about the poem.<br /><br /><b>Rallentanda</b><br />Ah, the knees! I did wonder if they might cause more trouble. We had quietly outgrown the car and were scraping our knees on the underside of the dash. Bruised and grazed rather than battered - but a little poetic license.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-85923940147948470522010-07-19T08:56:58.690+01:002010-07-19T08:56:58.690+01:00I am a little perplexed over the four battered kne...I am a little perplexed over the four battered knees imagery. <br />Rather adventurous for a first timer I would say.Rallentandanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-83065529209789029162010-07-19T00:41:02.910+01:002010-07-19T00:41:02.910+01:00Bloody hell! That oil stat is incredible!
The poem...Bloody hell! That oil stat is incredible!<br />The poem however is simply wonderful!<br />Poignant ,reflective, sad, but wonderful!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-4690591434092678662010-07-18T20:47:07.412+01:002010-07-18T20:47:07.412+01:00dave reading this brought me to remember my brothe...dave reading this brought me to remember my brother explaining the mechanics of sex in a mini.......... the gulf oil stat . . . oh my!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-34391486008795903822010-07-18T19:14:48.176+01:002010-07-18T19:14:48.176+01:00The adult world and the childhood world are so sim...The adult world and the childhood world are so similar yet worlds apart! I can see that car so clearly, and the rhymes help to drive the narrative I think.Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07642126053527835870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-29871985700818170582010-07-18T17:45:27.706+01:002010-07-18T17:45:27.706+01:00Oh Dave, I have a vision ~ a vintage MG with racin...Oh Dave, I have a vision ~ a vintage MG with racing stripes! And two lovers .... oh, how fun!<br /><br />but, the oil spill ~ it's no fun!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-31935888332837533822010-07-18T17:38:13.838+01:002010-07-18T17:38:13.838+01:00I don't always enjoy rhyming poems, but becaus...I don't always enjoy rhyming poems, but because of the subject I enjoyed this. And the haiku--us Americans are so wasteful and greedy!Conda Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12972790965426924941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-15276244227343868832010-07-18T17:07:41.719+01:002010-07-18T17:07:41.719+01:00Bitter and sweet. A great ride on the bus.Bitter and sweet. A great ride on the bus.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915236568015079389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-70133261019333715542010-07-18T16:51:25.114+01:002010-07-18T16:51:25.114+01:00I really enjoyed your poem--a lot of truths in the...I really enjoyed your poem--a lot of truths in there.<br /><br />Amazing statistic about the oil in the gulf.pilgrimchickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13808106043964544413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-39854547060828661982010-07-18T15:15:42.736+01:002010-07-18T15:15:42.736+01:00Oh, yes! You've earned your ticket for Monday&...Oh, yes! You've earned your ticket for Monday's bus, that's for sure!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com