tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post7543633084758454019..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: war correspondentDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-70589323362856704452012-05-15T04:09:04.439+01:002012-05-15T04:09:04.439+01:00Currently, the particular company basically Micros...Currently, the particular company basically <a href="http://www.buytopoffice2010.com/" rel="nofollow">Microsoft Office 2010</a> has documented the different involving fresh new fine-tuned the category of Company System distinctive line of merchandise would most likely email have missed august. It indicates Microsoft Office 2010 would have to have <a href="http://www.buytopoffice2010.com/microsoft-office-2010-c-10.html" rel="nofollow">Office 2010 Download</a> got a remaining enter the program for you to ship to assist System brands following often.A representative concerning Redmond, Wash.-based Master with scientific research dropped that you can statement because of this background. <a href="http://www.buytopoffice2010.com/" rel="nofollow">Office 2010</a>Poll Nikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490466200090918858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-74555369390965497812012-05-12T22:46:22.272+01:002012-05-12T22:46:22.272+01:00Superb Dave - this had me sighing with the pleasur...Superb Dave - this had me sighing with the pleasure of reading it.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-18430152893867440242012-05-11T11:18:51.895+01:002012-05-11T11:18:51.895+01:00cloudia
Such a sigh is so expressive.
Jeanette
...<b> cloudia</b><br />Such a sigh is so expressive.<br /><br /><b>Jeanette </b><br />Such a wonderful response to get, is this. I do thank you for it, but please don't worry if you think it makes NO difference to anyone but you, that's poetry for you and that's just how it should be.<br /><br />And never say NEVER. I couldn't, even a very short while ago. Looking at past poems I often want to shrivel up - or wish they would, antthing so that I might disown them.<br /><br /><b>Mary </b><br />It's pleasing to hear that you think this. Thanks.<br /><br /><b>Kymberlee </b><br />Hi! Really good to have you visiting. Your company and comments are most welcome. Thank you so much for your kind words. They are very much appreciated.<br /><br /><b>Brian </b><br />Thanks for saying - didn't quite intend the shivers, though. <br /><br /><b>Trellissimo </b><br />Nor me. Being taken by a great aunt to see "Salute the Soldier Week" (I think it was) in Hyde Park as an infant is one of my most chilling childhood memories. Traumatic at the time.<br /><br /><b>Hank </b><br />Ouch, not too much so, I hope.<br /><br /><b>Tommaso </b><br />Yes, I take your point. It's a far too common experience!<br /><br /><b>Windsmoke </b><br />Much thanks.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-48686372917213912302012-05-10T21:59:48.920+01:002012-05-10T21:59:48.920+01:00Very enjoyable indeed :-).Very enjoyable indeed :-).Windsmoke.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12225394580987872677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-26868221708539387132012-05-10T19:22:52.482+01:002012-05-10T19:22:52.482+01:00The poem grows into the last line with a spontaneo...The poem grows into the last line with a spontaneous force.<br /><br />And makes me think of many fateful and inevitable "until it is too late" one has come and will again come across.Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-14774202326817928742012-05-10T18:41:21.383+01:002012-05-10T18:41:21.383+01:00It comes on strong. Felt somewhat unsettled. Great...It comes on strong. Felt somewhat unsettled. Great write Dave!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-59376496327829236452012-05-10T18:16:56.962+01:002012-05-10T18:16:56.962+01:00The thought of a sea of faces is enough to make me...The thought of a sea of faces is enough to make me feel queasy... I'm not keen on crowds!Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-65703247166364941492012-05-10T15:16:54.388+01:002012-05-10T15:16:54.388+01:00you left me with shivers at the end man...this is ...you left me with shivers at the end man...this is def strong...and particularly as you draw this to a close....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-1994243087727656982012-05-10T12:52:25.773+01:002012-05-10T12:52:25.773+01:00"Of currents powered by primal forces.
Emotiv..."Of currents powered by primal forces.<br />Emotivations far below the skin.<br />And how cross-purposefulness,<br />as between the different streams,<br />puts them in conflict with each other -<br />and in time with every one," Powerful poem. Deep truths beautifully expressed. Your writing is amazing. If there's an option here, I will be sharing it.Kymberlee Harrisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06637888516485420282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-60537920269178124162012-05-10T12:26:51.906+01:002012-05-10T12:26:51.906+01:00VERY strong last stanza. So much to think about.VERY strong last stanza. So much to think about.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-24639578889611722342012-05-10T12:19:25.250+01:002012-05-10T12:19:25.250+01:00This is so typical of people. We never really know...This is so typical of people. We never really know anyone. We can only know the sides of themselves they choose to share and shows us.<br />Wonderful write Dave, deep, powerful in its truths and imagery.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-73732775986837230452012-05-10T06:49:34.388+01:002012-05-10T06:49:34.388+01:00"The faces may be drawn,
stressed-out by moon..."The faces may be drawn,<br />stressed-out by moon or mooniness,<br />be whipped by winds<br />and shallow feelings, but beware:"<br /><br />This is one of the things I love in your poetry, Dave. So often, I ride the first parts of your poem, sensing I am being expertly taken to an end that makes me go, "YES. I understand." I don't NEED to think about the ride; I feel it and go with it.<br /><br />Those lines that open the last stanza already made me go "YES." And the conclusion simply solidified the whole thing in my core.<br /><br />And that may have made NO sense to anyone but me, but I'm okay with that. Sufficeth to say that you know it means that I LIKE this poem and then some.<br /><br />"they break and shatter in a spray..."<br /><br />I will never be able to write poetry as you can. NEVERJeannetteLShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13528285846408727632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-39425563604216124842012-05-10T06:12:36.335+01:002012-05-10T06:12:36.335+01:00"until it is too late."
*Sigh*
Warm ..."until it is too late."<br /><br /><br />*Sigh*<br /><br /><br />Warm Aloha from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> > < } } (°>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com