tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post8166743167817459837..comments2023-12-28T13:11:06.666+00:00Comments on Pics and Poems: The Great ExchangeDave Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-27792573097894447562013-07-29T11:00:47.755+01:002013-07-29T11:00:47.755+01:00Just the other day I was reading about going into ...Just the other day I was reading about going into the woods at night. It's the most wonderful spectacle ever. I have done it with the Woodcraft a few times. I loved your poem. I really did. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-49124255463610114192013-07-29T05:27:31.248+01:002013-07-29T05:27:31.248+01:00My feeling drift between dream and real world, pan...My feeling drift between dream and real world, panic and solace.haricothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14052133324297115131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-23851546484946740762013-07-27T07:31:51.254+01:002013-07-27T07:31:51.254+01:00The panic in the trees can be frightening if not f...The panic in the trees can be frightening if not for the calming effects provided by the birds. Nicely Dave!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-58360992917913868892013-07-27T01:38:38.293+01:002013-07-27T01:38:38.293+01:00You have a gift for story telling Dave ~ I enjoye...You have a gift for story telling Dave ~ I enjoyed the imaginative leap of being lost in the woods ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-21382024561226349222013-07-26T21:19:59.238+01:002013-07-26T21:19:59.238+01:00Yes, in dreams this happens. You describe the pani...Yes, in dreams this happens. You describe the panic well, and the birds...I felt every line of this. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-47912340856305903102013-07-26T19:31:26.566+01:002013-07-26T19:31:26.566+01:00I think this well describes the incongruity of a d...I think this well describes the incongruity of a dream Dave.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-1663026357518745672013-07-26T19:13:00.839+01:002013-07-26T19:13:00.839+01:00I was really taken by the whole vision, intensely ...I was really taken by the whole vision, intensely vivid..with a feeling of the same intensity that the poem should continue! Tommaso Gervasuttihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137499390434949734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-76794062667459645112013-07-26T18:05:25.639+01:002013-07-26T18:05:25.639+01:00You are lost in a wood.
It is a real wood,
a woo...You are lost in a wood.<br /> It is a real wood,<br /> a wood you thought you knew --<br /> that was until a moment back<br /> when all the trees changed places<br /> with their cousins from your dream.<br /><br />You are a paper cut-out <br />from another land.<br /><br />These lines spoke to me, the whole poem did actually. Loved it.<br /> Cait O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04569760764766505179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-48393731528358839562013-07-26T17:58:06.365+01:002013-07-26T17:58:06.365+01:00So frightening when stuff you thought you knew is ...So frightening when stuff you thought you knew is all different and foreign.Taborhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257045780724471840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-51368984148719997922013-07-26T16:48:52.522+01:002013-07-26T16:48:52.522+01:00I like the images the words have created.I like the images the words have created.Rachna Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900999965919504282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-41143711563702166222013-07-26T13:33:49.196+01:002013-07-26T13:33:49.196+01:00that was vivid and rather intense....esp at the th...that was vivid and rather intense....esp at the thought of being impaled on the thorns...the feel of panic even in the trees as well...glad there is peace by the end...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-37465647227423530582013-07-26T12:51:55.354+01:002013-07-26T12:51:55.354+01:00A nest and some fledglings.....yes, good that the ...A nest and some fledglings.....yes, good that the birds have returned, along with a calmness and hopefully hope. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2508563923634392703.post-7790255606021370772013-07-26T12:49:18.910+01:002013-07-26T12:49:18.910+01:00Nice sense of the way panic can drift over us and ...Nice sense of the way panic can drift over us and back out again.Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09751363280115223716noreply@blogger.com