Thursday, 11 November 2010

Two Haiku

mist and tree are merged
they have embraced each other
people stand apart.


art and religion
shape and embrace our feelings -
pity lonely moods
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12 comments:

  1. Carl11 November 2010 at 13:14

    Wonderful work Dave!

    Both have me thinking today.

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  2. David Cranmer11 November 2010 at 13:19

    Very nice, Dave.

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  3. CiCi11 November 2010 at 14:42

    If only people could be more natural in joining or even rubbing elbows.

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  4. Cloudia12 November 2010 at 02:44

    Successful!






    Aloha from Waikiki :)

    Comfort Spiral

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  5. Windsmoke.12 November 2010 at 03:42

    A lot of embracing going on. Are they meant to be linked?.

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  6. Olivia12 November 2010 at 08:53

    Very well said David.. xx

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  7. Olivia12 November 2010 at 08:55

    Your poetry is amazing...with supporters such as you stand beside us, we can continue our efforts and make the potluck event more enjoyable for its large number of entries, multiple levels or types of talents, and authentic enjoyment of poetry and poetry reading...Come in any time when we are open, feel free to ask questions and read others.
    Thank you in advance.
    Have A Weekend A Graceful As Your Spirits.
    xoxox

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  8. Dave King12 November 2010 at 10:30

    Grateful thanks to all for the feedback. Amen, I think, to TechnoBabe, and yes, Windsmoke, they were meant to be linked. The one is a sort of echo of the other. Thanks again to Olvia. Shall do my best.

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  9. Mairi12 November 2010 at 22:29

    The first is an apt piece for the season coming upon us - the mood of the natural world making the last line more noticeably felt.

    Thanks for your interview comment on Robert Frost's Banjo.

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  10. Dave King13 November 2010 at 10:06

    Mairi
    Welcome and many thanks.

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  11. Strummed Words13 November 2010 at 21:30

    Love the way you give philosophical messages in your haiku!

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  12. Anonymous17 November 2010 at 14:17

    great set of haiku. very thought provoking, making it even better! glad i stopped to visit your site.


    take care! ~700miles

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