Saturday, 22 January 2011

3 Haiku


at dusk a clear sky
criss-crossed in a moment by
bright orange vapour trails


rain on top of frost
and the world transformed again -
by frozen porridge


homes are for profit
parking and storage are for hire
in times of recession

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12 comments:

  1. The Weaver of Grass22 January 2011 at 15:08

    Yes the clear sky tells just how many planes have gone over - sometimes the sky looks full of them.

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  2. Jinksy22 January 2011 at 15:41

    Frozen porridge? What an idea?! LOL

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  3. angryparsnip22 January 2011 at 17:01

    frozen porridge ?
    love it....
    I write about what I see... so how cold was in the UK yesterday ?

    cheers, parsnip

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  4. Helen22 January 2011 at 17:29

    Three Dave originals ... what a way to begin my day!

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  5. Louise22 January 2011 at 18:04

    Great post as per usual Dave.

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  6. Kass22 January 2011 at 18:30

    Pithy and apt.

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  7. Dave King23 January 2011 at 11:16

    Thanks everyone
    The sky was sensational. I could not do justice to it. One second there was nothing in the sky and then the dying sun caught them all and they were everywhere. Tangerine coloured.

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  8. Kathe W.23 January 2011 at 15:39

    gorgeous shot- you seized that magic moment! and thanks for your nice comments! I appreciate you taking the time!

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  9. Dave King23 January 2011 at 19:09

    kathew
    And welcome to you.. Thanks for your visit and the comments.

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  10. Lucas23 January 2011 at 21:55

    I get an enormous sense of peace from just looking at it!

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  11. Carl24 January 2011 at 00:02

    3 for the price of 1 haiku. Love them all.

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  12. Tilly Bud24 January 2011 at 12:06

    I love these haiku; especially the middle one.

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