Sunday, 16 January 2011

"Haiku" #334

Don't confuse my "Haiku" with genuine Haiku. (see here)

seen on Christmas Day
nesting in the Christmas tree
a turtle dove
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8 comments:

  1. The Weaver of Grass16 January 2011 at 10:26

    Surely there must have been two, Dave?

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  2. Shadow16 January 2011 at 10:29

    peace!

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  3. Dave King16 January 2011 at 10:53

    Weaver
    Apparently not, just one - and now a blackbird trying to tale over the nest. (They're leaving the tree in place for now.)

    Shadow
    be with you!

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  4. CiCi16 January 2011 at 11:54

    You, the poetry master, can teach me; genuine Haiku as opposed to artificial Haiku? I hope the dove found a friend even if it is a blackbird.

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  5. Titus16 January 2011 at 12:15

    Signs and wonders!

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  6. Carl16 January 2011 at 14:49

    omen for a good year to be sure.

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  7. Richard Theodore Beck16 January 2011 at 15:18

    2 coo full breasted
    one missing lost or nested
    soup in my kitchen

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  8. Dave King17 January 2011 at 10:22

    TechnoBabe
    Yeah, I asked for that, I guess. The intention was not so much to teach, just to acknowledge that I've been taking a few liberties with the haiku; taking its form, discarding its spirit. Just thought I ought not to mislead.

    Titus
    I wonder...

    Carl
    I'll go along with that - got to, haven't we?

    Adrian
    Thanks

    Theodore
    Great. I dig it!

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