they have embraced each other
people stand apart.
shape and embrace our feelings -
pity lonely moods
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Wonderful work Dave!
Both have me thinking today.
Very nice, Dave.
If only people could be more natural in joining or even rubbing elbows.
Successful!
Aloha from Waikiki :)
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A lot of embracing going on. Are they meant to be linked?.
Very well said David.. xx
Your poetry is amazing...with supporters such as you stand beside us, we can continue our efforts and make the potluck event more enjoyable for its large number of entries, multiple levels or types of talents, and authentic enjoyment of poetry and poetry reading...Come in any time when we are open, feel free to ask questions and read others.
Thank you in advance.
Have A Weekend A Graceful As Your Spirits.
xoxox
Grateful thanks to all for the feedback. Amen, I think, to TechnoBabe, and yes, Windsmoke, they were meant to be linked. The one is a sort of echo of the other. Thanks again to Olvia. Shall do my best.
The first is an apt piece for the season coming upon us - the mood of the natural world making the last line more noticeably felt.
Thanks for your interview comment on Robert Frost's Banjo.
Mairi
Welcome and many thanks.
Love the way you give philosophical messages in your haiku!
great set of haiku. very thought provoking, making it even better! glad i stopped to visit your site.
take care! ~700miles
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