A public space a working space one that earns its keep herds of cow and deer hard clods of earth hide beneath the grass turning ankles elsewhere soft clogging soil bog-traps feet. A man approaches walking several dogs. One dog disappears into the undergrowth smells something I can't smell hears something I can't hear and doubtless now sees something I can't see The man's a long leash-length from me calls gets no response Different landscapes his and mine on one hand and the dogs Their landscapes telescoped with ours. We are in need of something a technology an inspiration a moment of pure genius that will extend the landscape's scope unroll the whole in one exposure never seen before see nature's whole-frame collage how a million mini-landscapes go to make the picture in the frame: fragments of cloth the bits and bobs the photographs and cuttings cut from lives (not ours). Reappearing from a clump of seeding bracken something limp and bloodied hanging from its jaws too far away for me to see rat rabbit what it is the dog appears to have re-entered our known landscape. Hardly! Landscape is defined not by the sensed but by the sensing not by surroundings but by our neural architecture If rat or rabbit happened to have been last of its kind it would have been a landscape lost for ever. Tomorrow landscapes - his and ours - will show a change. The dog's will still be sound ours will have shrunk again parts replaced or simply lost. In every frame there are as many landscapes as creatures living there. If we can but pull out the scope to see it in its full extent. Look through the scope... who knows what might be seen?
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Wednesday, 6 July 2011
A Walk in the Park
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Nicely done, sir.
I particularly liked Landscape is defined ...by our neural architecture
The physical architecture of this poem is rewarding. I like the flow and I also like what it says. So true, all seen through our own eyes.
Who knows indeed. If we could have the eyes to see the whole picture, the entwining of all, including us.
Good piece. I agree with Leatherdykeuk: those are definitely the key lines in the poem.
I do think we all see the landscape in a different way Dave - that is what makes it so interesting.
Brilliant!
ThePeSla
Yes.There are infinite landscapes. I totally agree.
How marvellously clear it was this for Blake who looked for the same territories you are visiting with this poem when he said: "if the doors of perception were opened..."
A walk through the infinite landscape with our eyes enhanced by technology :-).
I enjoyed your dog walking view of the world and some ...
Leatherdykeuk
Thanks, much appreciate the info'.
Tabor
Interesting and useful to know. Many thanks.
TechnoBabe
I'd just finished this when I picked up a newspaper and read of the latest "discoveries" re dark material and dark energy. It was saying that all we can detect with our senses and our instruments accounts for less than 5% of what is around us.
Jim
Again, that's interesting to hear. I didn't quite see it that way when I wrote the poem, but I'm beginning to. Thanks for the thought.
The Weaver of Grass
Yes, I fully agree - and how different must it look to other creatures with different equipment!
ThePeSla
A warm welcome to you, and many thanks for leaving a comment.
Tommaso
Absolutely. And the doors that are neer fully open are in any case only partial doors.
Windsmoke
Thanks, yes - but only slightly enhanced.
Isabel
Thanks Isabel - if only we could talk to the dog!
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