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Saturday, 22 January 2011

3 Haiku


at dusk a clear sky
criss-crossed in a moment by
bright orange vapour trails



rain on top of frost
and the world transformed again -
by frozen porridge



homes are for profit
parking and storage are for hire
in times of recession


12 comments:

The Weaver of Grass said...

Yes the clear sky tells just how many planes have gone over - sometimes the sky looks full of them.

Jinksy said...

Frozen porridge? What an idea?! LOL

angryparsnip said...

frozen porridge ?
love it....
I write about what I see... so how cold was in the UK yesterday ?

cheers, parsnip

Helen said...

Three Dave originals ... what a way to begin my day!

120 Socks said...

Great post as per usual Dave.

Kass said...

Pithy and apt.

Dave King said...

Thanks everyone
The sky was sensational. I could not do justice to it. One second there was nothing in the sky and then the dying sun caught them all and they were everywhere. Tangerine coloured.

kathew said...

gorgeous shot- you seized that magic moment! and thanks for your nice comments! I appreciate you taking the time!

Dave King said...

kathew
And welcome to you.. Thanks for your visit and the comments.

Lucas said...

I get an enormous sense of peace from just looking at it!

Carl said...

3 for the price of 1 haiku. Love them all.

Tilly Bud said...

I love these haiku; especially the middle one.