It had looked so inviting from below,
a low domed hill, and on its crown
a circle of young trees. The climb
was undertaken willingly. We found
the circle ringed a hollow in the ground -
the sort that's not uncommon on these downs.
Best bet: a German bomber, homeward bound
had dumped the remnants of its load. If so,
one bomb had carved a saucer from the chalk.
We weren't the first to see it in those terms:
for someone at a later date, came, stood
an iron mug, a huge and rusting thing,
of purpose indeterminate, smack in
its shallow centre where a cup should go.
Its toppled since that day, stands now aslant,
bumped out of its complacency, no doubt
by the red pedal car, for ever wedged
between a whitebeam and a beech. There was
no road to that high place, which through the years
had sprouted rosebud toilets (broken: two),
a bedstead, fridge and T.V. set, a bike,
a motorcycle (minus wheels) and a
large body-building gizmo with a range
of hooks and chains more like a torturing
machine. A red stain as of blood did not
put any minds to rest. But worst of all -
it was a bigger mess, by God
than that the Heinkel left.
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16 comments:
Quite depressing really Dave isn't it? It is exactly the same up here in the Dales
What a disturbing image...that our lives are more garbage filled and destructive than a war! Actually it is the veneer of time that covers all. I have been reading books and watching movies of this time in your country...not a research...just that it all has come together for me these days.
mmm, nice verse dave...def a thought provoker...
Whoa. Someone is not happy with the way things are going in the modern world! I certainly agree. You have described the debris in such sharp and vivid terms, it feels not apocalyptic exactly, but like such a slash on the landscape and consciousness. Very interesting. (I do not think of these things in the UK. I know it is very naive of me--I think of the old shells, etc, but not this modern detritus.) K.
Just took a walk through a woodsy area the other day. Someone dumped an old television back off the road. So stupid when city dumps take these things. NO need to litter.
Fly tippers I often wonder what sort of animals they are! Good write :D
Ughh. I posted about this too in the summer when I found garbage bags and trash strewn on the trail to a beautiful waterfall.
And, it just grows and grows! I really like the rhythm of this.
So inviting from below and on top... just crap, wow!
A cemetery of past wonders, broken objects, garbage now,
machine bones, even the remnants of a bomb...
It is the tribute to something called "progress", civilization,
where to be is buy, consume and throw away...
A red stain as of blood did not
put any minds to rest
Excellent realistic poem denouncing this holy creepy crap, Dave.
We wouldn't miss that mass of mess!
Anticlimax, indeed.
:)
Vivid images, absolutely at focus.
I liked the "rosebud toilet" in particular.
Fear and attraction, the sublime. What the children know best.
Vivid image of bomb crater filled with ugly rubbish in what sounds like a pristine area of woodlands :-).
great post...I like the comment..."slash in the landscape"...that's a phrase to get the imagination going.
Your writing suggest the fear that men do without thinking but just do as other do...
Subjective images, powerful and a little terrifying. Liked the end the most!
The Weaver of Grass
Depressing is right. Can't see the reason for it. Why struggle up such a hill just to dump large and awkward objects at the top? Your walk this morning made a lovely contrast!
Tabor
Yes you're right about the veneer that time leaves, but then all the bomber did was drop a bomb which threw earth around on the top of a hill and left a shallow crater. Time and nature covered it over and then someone came along and dumped gerbage on it.
Brian
Thanks.
manicddaily
Actually, I think you are very wise to think thus. Good on you!
Mary
Couldn't agree more. Why? Makes no sense.
Rose
Me too! Thanks.
Carl
Yes, I remember. I don't suppose they'll take any more notice of me than they did you!
Mama Zen
I does too! Thank you for saying that.
Dulcina
I nearly called it "Disappointment", but thought that understated it.
Tommaso
Somebody didn't like it, obviously! Thanks Tommaso.
Windsmoke
Well nearly pristine - the Luftwaffe had re-contoured it!
Gerry
Thanks for the observation, Gerry.
haricot
Yes, I think that puts it very neatly.
Monika
Thank you for this - the sort of thing I like to know.
What does it tell us of those who use a should-be respected Earth-scar as a garbage dumping ground?
That in disrespecting Earth, they have lost their self-respect?
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