TechnoBabe Yeah, I asked for that, I guess. The intention was not so much to teach, just to acknowledge that I've been taking a few liberties with the haiku; taking its form, discarding its spirit. Just thought I ought not to mislead.
Titus I wonder...
Carl I'll go along with that - got to, haven't we?
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Surely there must have been two, Dave?
peace!
Weaver
Apparently not, just one - and now a blackbird trying to tale over the nest. (They're leaving the tree in place for now.)
Shadow
be with you!
You, the poetry master, can teach me; genuine Haiku as opposed to artificial Haiku? I hope the dove found a friend even if it is a blackbird.
Signs and wonders!
omen for a good year to be sure.
2 coo full breasted
one missing lost or nested
soup in my kitchen
TechnoBabe
Yeah, I asked for that, I guess. The intention was not so much to teach, just to acknowledge that I've been taking a few liberties with the haiku; taking its form, discarding its spirit. Just thought I ought not to mislead.
Titus
I wonder...
Carl
I'll go along with that - got to, haven't we?
Adrian
Thanks
Theodore
Great. I dig it!
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