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Thursday, 21 October 2010

Haiku #295

They will get jealous
of their husbands' female friends -
women on the pill.

10 comments:

Helen said...

From deep in the South ... (on the road) ... loved these last three haiku creations!

Derrick said...

Plays havoc with the emotions huh?

Frances said...

Dave, You don't think No. 295 just the teeniest weeniest bit patronising?

Raj said...

lol. they get jeaolus of thei own frnds even when they r not married!

The Weaver of Grass said...

The farmer says he has not got any female friends (should I be pleased or suspicious?)

Cloudia said...

Penetrating as they are simple!




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David Cranmer said...

Hola, Dave!

(I'm not sure what other comment to leave:)

Windsmoke. said...

Watch out for those sharp claws when jealously rears it's ugly head.

Dave King said...

Thanks everyone I did wonder whet you all would find to say about this one - and yes, Frances, I did find it patronising in the extreme, but it was reported as a piece of science, not mere opinion.

Lucas said...

These three new haiku are very effective I think because the references are not famous. They therefore reach out to the surrounding culture in a slightly perplexing yet true way, startlingly and deceptively simple.
The discussions that follow are quite important for full understanding.