From deep in the South ... (on the road) ... loved these last three haiku creations!
Plays havoc with the emotions huh?
Dave, You don't think No. 295 just the teeniest weeniest bit patronising?
lol. they get jeaolus of thei own frnds even when they r not married!
The farmer says he has not got any female friends (should I be pleased or suspicious?)
Penetrating as they are simple!Aloha from HawaiiComfort Spiral><}}(°>
Hola, Dave!(I'm not sure what other comment to leave:)
Watch out for those sharp claws when jealously rears it's ugly head.
Thanks everyone I did wonder whet you all would find to say about this one - and yes, Frances, I did find it patronising in the extreme, but it was reported as a piece of science, not mere opinion.
These three new haiku are very effective I think because the references are not famous. They therefore reach out to the surrounding culture in a slightly perplexing yet true way, startlingly and deceptively simple.The discussions that follow are quite important for full understanding.
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