After the 12th Night of drinking and loud belchingI snack on your poems.Sometimes, I think tomyself, what hubris I haveto Haiku like you.
Your audiences keep up to date with the news through reading your haiku, Dave - there's a haiku there somewhere but not sure where.Reading your daily blogkeeps me abreast of affairswithout watching boring TV.Sorry - not very good Dave
Weaver - Don't be so hard on yourself. It's brilliant. I think it would be great if everyone responded to Dave's Haiku with Haiku of their own, but then, I'm a control freak.
Dave's Haiku's inspirepen to paper we summonemulate we aim.
Mmmm, oysters and Shakespeare all in one haiku.
An edible thoughtI must flee for the kitchen!Dave makes me hungry.
What a haiku, pretty good. Clear truth spoken trough it.
shakespears audience and oysters? ok so definitely next is romeo and juliet meeting ceasar. :P
Kass I don't suppose I could hire you to ghost write them, could I? Superb.Weaver On the contrary, very good - but what is it about T.V. news? They seem able to make the most dramatic of items totally boring.Kass again: I'm for that! Brilliant idea. Carl Great - I feel we're getting into the swim of things, now!Ronda We aim to please.Enchanted Oak I do like the idea of an edible thought!Mariana Thanks for that.Raj I'm up for that, also!
Thinks:- would 'hectoring' be better than 'bantering'? I think that's what audiences used to do...
while feeding the cats this morning I came up with this one..Like sharks circlinga boat on open watermy cats await food....
wow, they ate well...
Hi Dave,Shakespearean audiencesreflected social mores.We do likewise.
jinksy Don't know. I started with hectoring and then changed it. I think they're as broad as they are long. Thanks for the suggestion, though.Carl excellent. I really like that one.Shadow Yeah!Derrick Socially very apt. That one could grow into something more - if you'll forgive the pun, which was half-intended!.
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