on oysters, sturgeon, steaks and pies
while bantering Sir Toby Belch.
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14 comments:
After the 12th Night
of drinking and loud belching
I snack on your poems.
Sometimes, I think to
myself, what hubris I have
to Haiku like you.
Your audiences keep up to date with the news through reading your haiku, Dave - there's a haiku there somewhere but not sure where.
Reading your daily blog
keeps me abreast of affairs
without watching boring TV.
Sorry - not very good Dave
Weaver - Don't be so hard on yourself. It's brilliant. I think it would be great if everyone responded to Dave's Haiku with Haiku of their own, but then, I'm a control freak.
Dave's Haiku's inspire
pen to paper we summon
emulate we aim.
Mmmm, oysters and Shakespeare all in one haiku.
An edible thought
I must flee for the kitchen!
Dave makes me hungry.
What a haiku, pretty good. Clear truth spoken trough it.
shakespears audience and oysters?
ok so definitely next is romeo and juliet meeting ceasar. :P
Kass
I don't suppose I could hire you to ghost write them, could I? Superb.
Weaver
On the contrary, very good - but what is it about T.V. news? They seem able to make the most dramatic of items totally boring.
Kass again: I'm for that! Brilliant idea.
Carl
Great - I feel we're getting into the swim of things, now!
Ronda
We aim to please.
Enchanted Oak
I do like the idea of an edible thought!
Mariana
Thanks for that.
Raj
I'm up for that, also!
Thinks:- would 'hectoring' be better than 'bantering'? I think that's what audiences used to do...
while feeding the cats this morning I came up with this one..
Like sharks circling
a boat on open water
my cats await food....
wow, they ate well...
Hi Dave,
Shakespearean audiences
reflected social mores.
We do likewise.
jinksy
Don't know. I started with hectoring and then changed it. I think they're as broad as they are long. Thanks for the suggestion, though.
Carl
excellent. I really like that one.
Shadow
Yeah!
Derrick
Socially very apt. That one could grow into something more - if you'll forgive the pun, which was half-intended!.
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