I remember it
as from a dream:
Stan and I both slowing,
still breathless from the climb.
Ahead of us the road,
foreshortened, fell away
beyond our view.
Stan sitting up,
hands resting for a moment on the bars
before they drop down to the brakes:
I'm looking where I'm going here!
Saying it as Randy vanished with the road,
a small dot hurtling down.
Then at the bottom, tight right-hander.
Of Randy, not a sign; but round the bend,
propped by its pedal, standing in the kerb
and upright, nonchalant almost,
as though he'd put it there,
his bike. Back wheel a figure eight.
Next thing, we see a line that might
almost be painted in the road
to draw attention to the bend
so perfect is the curve of it,
a long black mark that hugs the kerb,
burnt rubber from the tyres;
and on the chevron by the roadside,
a shattered red reflector;
while to our left, the hedge demolished.
A loud groan from beyond the hedge,
the star-shape of the red reflector
imprinted in the forehead's
bone and tissue.
And then the ambulance;
and last of all, the doctor's query:
"A motor cycle accident? Must be!"
We never did get over
the way the bicycle had parked itself.
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whizzzz - zing - kerplunk
hope the scars have healed
Oh! That must have been quite an accident.
I had to laugh at the synchronicity here- there's another 'Two in Tandem' post on Alias Jinksy today! Did you mean to do a poetic ad for it? LOL Thanks...
Me too, I've lost touch with him now, unfortunately. I think at the time we all treated it as a great adventure, the way boys do. Photographs in the paper etc, ect.
It was. Spectacular was one word used to describe it, I recall.
Sure! Of course I did!
You all lived to tell the tale, especially Stan. I loved this poem - it made me smile.
As a cyclist I found myself getting quite involved in what happened here. I love the way you gradually reveal what happened, and the ending is just right.
And what of Stan?
Happy to read your hair raising tale. It does fit Jinksy's Tandem #7 painting. A fun new prompt.
Very enjoyable and humourous that's what i like :-).
Brought back memories of funtimes and mishaps with friends racing our bike on the trails of the mountain we lived on.
We did all live to tell the tale - and have dined out on it quite a bit!
It was my first cycle tour, but didn't put me off. Not at all.
The Weaver of Grass
Ah! Thanks for the question, for it has made me realise that I write Stan when I should have written Randy.( Both names are fictitious, of course, as per my usual practice.) I'm afraid that as originally written it gave a misleading - not to say confusing - account. My humble apologies to all. It has now been corrected.
A warm welcome to the blog, thanks for the comment, and yes to both observations!
Ah, those were the days!
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