Space calls the soul landscapes know how create themselves in space they leave around themselves and balance it with space displaced counterbalanced the two are one mould and moulded each is either each moulds other neither supreme looking at one do you see both do you focus tiny detail or do eyes sweep like T.V. guns refreshing screens space is solid sweep and focus miss the solid look deeply in as if into a lover's eyes the landscape is the more sublime the more the two are equalised artists have tools to show this space in paint or stone but where are words for poets' use how can language describe a space solidify it in the mind and give it weight to equal flint or sycamores when landscape calls and shape is seen to shape the call when heft is felt how sculptural the rest becomes!
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Saturday 10 September 2011
Giving Space Its Due
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I've read this several times and am beginning to understand it. Too much brain exercise for a Saturday morning;-)
I read this and see this as an extension of your landart. Nice word painting. Well balanced.
A nicely constructed piece and its layout forces one to take time over reading it what with those huge leaps from column to column (interesting that at this time of year you’d construct a poem of two ‘towers’ like this). I read it over several times. Most thought-provoking but, today at least, I have nothing to add.
Dave, you must have a gun to your head the way you're cranking out these gems... Tell your assailant thank you. :)
I got an image of wide open spaces across a vast landscape :-).
Very cool. Sweep and focus I shall indeed.
Neat, mind tangler. I admire your way with the words!
jabblog
Apologies, not the intention. It was something of a dry run for today.
The Unknowingnome
You are not wrong. I guess my central interest - certainly at the moment - is with landscape, though I don't have a special one in land art as suc, but I do think that it overlaps with much else. It all comes down to definitions.
Jim
I suspect that's great anticipation on your part! In fact I was writing these two poems together. I wrote them first with lines of four syllables, didn't feel it was quite right, so conflated them into lines of eight. That still didn't feel right, so I tried splittimg the lines - first with yesterday's. That's whenthe idea of the two towers struck. I think that's Jim 1: Dave 0! Nice comment. Thanks.
David
It's that ole devil man! He behind me all the time!
Windsmoke
That's marvellous. Now I need to know what formed the image so that I can bottle it. Thanks.
Carl
Good on ya, Carl!
ArtistUnplugged
Good to have you visiting again. Thanks for the kind comment.
Vivid poetry. I loved it! I am amazed by its structure.
Jack
Welcome, good to have you visiting. Thanks for saying what you felt. (Apologies for not responding earlier.)
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