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Friday, 16 December 2011
Alba Madonna by Raphael
Not in the gospels,
Leonardo's bright idea:
John the Baptist,
the infant Christ.
Raphael endorses it;
gives the two of them
a plaything cross
Mary's finger holds
the place of older
prophecy - Isaiah's;
yet to be fulfilled.
The composition's style
again, is Leonardo's.
Not the light.
Gone, da Vinci's mystery,
this light is bright
and even. Democratic,
even. Mellow as befits
a rural idyll,
The image is from Wikipedia.
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Great Dave! These paintings from the old masters are just fantastic! We just can't help but marvel at the fineness and composition of the images depicted. Your verse is excellent!
A beautiful poem that pays tribute to some of the world's finest art!
Great words for when art wasn't ... err ... transient.
The story told so many ways, your poem a worthy addition to the depicted scene:)
I like this very much. It's wonderful--so vivid and exact, and almost tells a story. The end, of course, is beautiful. I have a poem posted somewhere back about a paintingn of St. Agatha in Padua. Not so good--well, she's pretty different. Maybe I'll find link.
This is lovely though. K.
very nice dave...like how you point to the differences in the old prophecy and how the artist and even we sometimes envision it...
Beautiful poem. I hoped over via the Deja Vu link, and I'm a new follower.
Hello! I'm a new follower from the DejaVu Blogfest. Nice to meet you!
Ah yes, those were the days when everything seemed so 'untroubled' as depicted in the Old Masters. So much beauty to be found in the painting you featured AND in your words.
Beautiful! Came by for the Deja Vu blogfest but this was a great post, anyway!
Wonderful poem Dave, and the picture is gorgeous.
beautiful poem for some beautiful artwork!
I wish I could write poetry like you. Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing! Glad I met you through DL's Deja Vu blogfest!
John the Baptist seems entranced by baby Christ, but Mary seems to be elsewhere (maybe planning her grocery list?). I like the notion of John the Baptist being childhood friends. “Mary's finger holds
the place of older prophecy - Isaiah's; yet to be fulfilled.” (Definitely heavier thoughts on her mind besides a grocery list.) I enjoyed the visualization and interpretation…it’s a piece of art you could discuss for hours.
Beautiful post! I'm participating in the blogfest. Lots of fun!
Next to Madonna with the Pinks this is my favourite Raphael Dave. I think you have done it justice with your poem.
Your poem adds a vital final dimension to this great work of art.
I shall never think of one without the other in future.
A true classic, Dave :)
Very enjoyable indeed because you just can't beat the old masters :-).
interesting post... happy holidays sir!
The words match the painting very well. Both works of art. :)
Wonderful picture and your words are just awesome.
Your words of homage for Vinci's mistery and Raphael's association are calmly infused into our minds.
I agree totally re the old masters. Thanks for the compliment.
Hi, godd to have your kind comment. Much thanks.
Nicely said. Amen.
Thanks, yes, you are right: there are endless ways of telling.
Thanks so much for amost helpful comment. Would be great if you could find the link.
Thank you for this. Yes, there are so many ways to go.
Hi Ciara, great to have you visiting and leaving a comment. Thanks for following.
A warm welcome to you. Really good to have you aboard. Thanks for leaving a comment.
You are right enough about they old masters, but a big thank you for including me!
Hi, it really is great to have your company. Thank you for the visit and for taking the trouble to leave a comment.
Thank you so much for responding. it is much appreciated.
Creepy Query Girl
Hi, and a very warm welcome to you. Thank you for your kind comment.
Really good to have you with us. Thank you so much for your kind comment.
Welcome to you. I agree with you about the expressions of the two women and the weightier matters probably occupying Mary's mind. Very many thaks for visiting and for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Hi and a warm welcome to my blog. Thank you for coming and for sharing your thoughts.
The Weaver of Grass
Thanks for the compliment. Doing justice to Raphael can't be bad!! I agree with you re the two Raphaels.
Wow, that's praise indeed! Thank you so much for it. (Can't think what else to say!)
Thanks - and I agree, you certainly can't.
Thanks - and every Blessing to you and yours.
Hi. Really good to have your company. Thank you so much for it - and for your kind words.
welcome to my world of poetry
Welcome to my blog and very many thanks for expressing such kind thoughts.
Lovely thought. Much thanks.
I really think your closing lines are ...remarkable. The description of the light as 'democratic' is so very interesting. And 'everything untroubled' in spite of that augury. They are not prophet and messiah here, they are little boys, and everything is untroubled.
'Gone, da Vinci's mystery,
this light is bright
and even. Democratic,
Many thanks for this critique. I really loved reading it. Much obliged and so glad you liked it.
Hey Dave! Was this your Deja vu Blogfest entry? Nice.
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